like like it alot

OH oh oh oh

I like where your going with this story...

It wouldn't make a bad story either if you added some hentai in it *snicker* *snicker*

still I think your writings pretty good

update soon

Wai! Wai! Me likes! Me likes! XD! Can't wait for Zelgadis to pop into the picture! Lina/Zel fics rule! n.n!

Umai! You have an excellent writing style, very descriptive, you captured the spirit of the characters quite well_ Can't wait for you to continue...Zelgadiss is one of my favorite characters(I think he and Lina make quite the nice couple, personally...)

And well...maybe her knees are a little *ahem* bony:P

FINISH THIS! *laughs* It's quite amusing. _ and she is not overly skinny! *pouts*