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| mikebreslau 2008-03-16 ch 5, | abuseI'm enjoying this greatly; particularly the subtle references to other works of fantasy fiction. In a spirit of helpfulness, I have noticed: 'Be' where 'been' was intended 'Party' where 'part' was intended 'Ble' where 'blue' was intended. |
| WS.Blue 2008-01-11 ch 7, | abuseI like the story in general, but the ending... isn't much of an ending, it's too rush and sudden. |
| Anime Fan 2006-05-18 ch 7, anon. | abuseComplete? You call this complete? If I might say so, it's only about 85-90% complete. It was going good too, it's a shame you abandoned it like that. Oh well, it was pretty nice while it lasted. |
| Lothar 2004-03-14 ch 7, | abuseAngst, but a pleasant angst filled with expectation that all will be resolved happily in the end. The Nanami cameo was a zany spark of whimsy. Still, if Herb is so familiar with female anatomy, why is he constantly ignorant of "feminine things" that women do? Things are moving along pretty quickly; maybe it was meant to be. In any case, more chapters, por favor. |
| pthaelo 2004-02-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseit's a good story, a little bit outta character, but, it's still nice |
| Shahrezad1 2004-02-18 ch 4, | abuseWAIT A SECOND! *glances at chapter four* ~NOW~ that makes sense! *smacks her forehead* Fruits Basket-oy! Yuki, Kyo, and Kagura. I thought that sounded familiar...and no wonder I was confused with the whole "But the one who did it was a GIRL!". =^__^= Okay, so I'm a little slow. |
| Shahrezad1 2003-12-31 ch 7, | abuseWell, it's been a while since you updated this fic, but I just had to review anway. *beams* This story is a delightful mix of Ranma 1/2, Harry Potter, and SailorMoon all in one (along with a few dashes of cameo appearances by the perverted Shinigami). It's not often that you read a Kodachi fic, much less a Herb fic, but this one is so well done and enjoyable that I can't help but love it-even with the interesting pairing. Hopefully you'll finish it (if you want to, of course), but until then I bid you adieu! Good luck on all your endeavers! |
| lynnxlady 2003-05-12 ch 7, | abuseWait, that's the end? *goes to look against at summary* Complete?! *sighz* Not a very satisfactory ending, but other than that, a good fic. The bits with Nabiki, Kuno, and Shampoo were amusing, and I liked the Kodachi/Herb romance. And *whew* no R/A like suggested in one of the beginnings. A good fic, even if I believe it could use an epilogue. |
| lynnxlady 2003-04-25 ch 1, | abuseOOh. Very interesting, this. I like Kodachi a lot; she's right up there with Kikyo of Inuyasha on my favorite female anime characters list. And Kodachi a witch? Cool. I'm not sure who Herb is, having only read through volume 20, but oh well. I'll go find myself a Ranma 1/2 site and read character profiles. Your writing is excellent, also, and I liked the 'painter of the day' metaphor. ^_^ I'll stash it in my favorites and put chapter 2 on my mental list of Things to Read. |
| Treacle 2003-03-10 ch 7, | abuseWow, this is really good! I was searching for some Herb fics (since there are so few), and this is the best one I've seen so far. PLEASE continue! |
| Shirogane 2002-12-02 ch 7, | abusecontinue damn it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| C. Rose 2002-10-09 ch 7, anon. | abuseFascinating story! Good job, let's see more ^_^ |
2002-09-13 ch 7, anon. | abuseEr...have been checking this fic here and on your website- are u going to update this soon? *puppy eyes* please please please please. One of the best multi-part Ranma fics I've read recently (amazing since I've sworn off reading Ranma fics for years after overdosing on 'em during college) Please continue! |
| Shuori 2002-08-08 ch 7, | abuseHurry up and update this! You're killing me here! Damn I just love Herb-baby and Kodachi^_^ |
| Catwho 2002-07-15 ch 1, | abuseHmmm, the email wasn't there before. *blink* I'm sorry if I came off sounding a bit . . . snotty about that. (I get defensive as much as anyone about my pet projects.) Thank you for letting me know about the website -- the chapters are there, but the links are nonexistant and I keep meaning to fix that. *goes to do that right now* Oh, and this is also archived on RAAC, for days when old FF.net is under the weather. |