 hamxham 2008-10-11 . chapter 1aww i loves it :) |
 Tomi Lang 2008-09-29 . chapter 1Oh! I like it, you should leave it as it is now. I don't think there is need for more. |
 Gartordog 2008-08-07 . chapter 1Love it! I didn't think I would but I DID! I wish there was more!! |
 SparklingStar25 2008-08-04 . chapter 1aww!!this is so cute!! |
 StarAngel02 2008-08-04 . chapter 1its really cute...u should definitely continue it... :D |
 Life gives lemons make lemonad 2008-08-04 . chapter 1yay awsome first chapter! Please update soon. |
 Death101- Fox Version 2008-08-03 . chapter 1Nice. You should consider continuing this as a story. But it's also a good oneshot. Awesome job!
-d101 |
 IceNin55 2008-08-03 . chapter 1Please continue!! And put names!!
This would make a great SS or ET fic. Good for any pairing really. |
 Moonlight Petal 2008-08-03 . chapter 1Aww! Originally I logged in just to read stories and add them to alerts but this story was so cute! I had to review, you can't blame me, LOL!
I really enjoyed the one-shot. His actions are so adorable. Hehe! Keep up the good work. = ) |
 misstruthfully 2008-08-03 . chapter 1Please put a continuation.. Please..
I really like this... :)
Hope you update soon..:) |
 MikoKagome1113 2008-08-03 . chapter 1AW I THINK YOU SHOULD CONTINUE IT!
Well, actually, idk, cause it makes a perfectly good one-shot too. I feel very satisfyed now!!
~Miko |