It's not all over yet is it? I've loved reading this, read the whole lot in one go. i hope there's more to come. . ..

Glad Jack found Ianto. That was a gross scene when the creature was drinking the weevil's blood, yuck! I do woner, even with more weapons and people, how they plan on killing that thing. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Judy

My heart goes out to Jack in this one. I wish he would have just opened up to Ianto (and Gwen to, I supose) and told him what happened. Now, Gwen is hurt, who knows where or how Ianto is, and Jack is in a state. I just hope that Ianto is still alive (hurt is ok as long as he'll be fine at the end). It's great that Martha is here to help. Maybe she can restore some balance to the team. Update soon please.

Judy

another good chapter, though less believable than the first, I found.

was there any reason for the italic and underlining? it was very distracting...

touched-but-unbroken

Great so far! Just one question Is this going to be Gwen/Jack pairing?

Good start. Just tell me this isn't going to be a Gwen/Jack story. I can't stand that pairing. But I look forward to reading more.

Judy

Amazing.

Really.