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| Lucillia 2008-08-13 ch 1,  | abuseGood one. Just imagining the "Luke, I'm your father" scene: "I am your father." "I already knew that." "Huh, How?" "Artoo told me." "Oh." |
| Jedi1952 2008-08-13 ch 1, | abuseWhat an outstanding little fic. Would love to see a long sequel to it. Well done! |
| Ann Jinn 2008-08-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is an absolutely brilliant story. Not a different point of view, but an eyewitness to so many things. A loose wire needing repair who wasn't always evil is a great perspective. Love the part where Anakin is mentioned as a co-pilot. |
| Beth Weasley 2008-08-07 ch 1, | abuse*laughs* 'Repair' Vader. Oh dear. When he's not having to talk through the filter of Threepio, Artoo's pretty smart, isn't he? No offense meant to 9-year-old Anakin, but Threepio just doesn't seem to be all there, if you know what I mean. This is a neat little fic, and I wish I knew what happened next! |
| Jazzyone 2008-08-06 ch 1, | abuseAnother good one! That was enjoyable and R2D2 was hilarious as always "maybe he has a loose wire" "maybe we can repair him" LOL. That was great. Still grumbling because you killed Clone Anakin and haven't make a Part II where he might reappear... taps foot, glares, taps foot again, huffs and goes to check email for updates from Jedinemo |
| Crystal Cat-chan 2008-08-05 ch 1, | abuseTHANK YOU! You are amazing, wonderful and creative, THANK YOU for untilizing that gaping Plot hole! This is going to be great! Hope to see more! |
| Balance in the Dark 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseNice intro, I hope thats not all? I like the idea of Luke going to Bespin with the knowlegde that Vader's his father. I hope to see more of this. BITD |
| ILDV 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseSo LOVELY |
| Rinter 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuse"MAYBE WE CAN REPAIR HIM." This fits well with a man more like a machine. I've always wondered why R2 didn't tell his memories to Luke. This story seems to be complete, although it could be longer :) |
| Anon 2008-08-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, this is very good! Good pacing and good dialogue. Love the phrase 'Maybe he has a loose wire.' Thanks for writing this. |
| PadawanMom 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, I love it. History from R2's perspective. I always wondered why he didn't speak up (that, and why Obi-Wan didn't recognize him on Tatooine, but that's a whole other story line...). I'm definitely looking forward to more of this one. My favorite lines: "Maybe he has a loose wire. He wasn't always that way." and "Maybe we can repair him." Heehee, Vader doesn't know what's about to hit him. Can't wait for the coversation where Luke tells him, "Well, R2 told me..." This could go very differently than cannon. |
| Jedi Knight 13 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuseThis has the hallmarks of a great story if you choose to continue it. I liked the fact that R2D2 is the one telling Luke about the truth behind Vader. Loved the line about maybe we can repair him. |
| Hamilcar 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is about the cutest, most touching fic I've seen dealing with the whole 'Bespin incident.' I especially loved the 'loose wire' and 'repairing' lines. Great, unique idea and well-written like always. :) |
| Lady MR1 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, what an interesting way to find out about Vader/Anakin. I love Artoo's question "Why haven't they told you?" Its absolutely what made the story for me. I wonder how Luke would react to Vader now... |