Hello,

This was very interesting! Could you please update it?

Good Writing,

The PreacherMan

It's pretty good! Don't have much else to say really...heh heh.

I like this. Sha'uri's thoughts and actions seem very likely.

This was a great chapter. I liked seeing these events from Sha're's point of view, Skaara's refusal to help her find something to wear was great.

Looking forward to more.

This was simply amazing! Every aspect of this fanfic is so beautifully handled: the characterization, the re-writting of the scenes from the movie, the character introspection... I'm really impressed by your talent, you seem to be understanding the Abydonians so well and your description of their way of life and even way of thinking is so vivid! Thanks for an excellent chapter, I'll be looking forward to more!

Well, I think it's very good so far! I'm writing an Abydonian-centered fic now, though it's mostly OC, but it's nice to see something familiar. I haven't found much more like this. Is Wishing on a Pebble another fic of yours? Maybe I'll check it out... I like your explanation and description of the events we already know, but I'm just wondering about Shau'ri and Skaara. I know they're close, but it seems here like she's always hanging on his arm. That seems a bit weird. But I look forward to the next chapter!

Loving this even without reading the other story. :) Nice to see what Sha'uri and Skaara might have been thinking, how they perceived things. You're doing fine figuring out what the Abydonians were saying.

This is great.

We all know the story and what's going to happen but seeing it from this point of view is something I've never seen.

Looking forward to the next chapter.