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Zarohk Korobase 7/5/10 . chapter 3
Mind if I say a series of song-based drabbles was inspired by your use of songs to inspire drabbles? And I hate to disagree with the writer but "There's all ways more drabbles to be had!" Really great, strange stuff; you have to sober to be this weird.
StarSwoop 2/6/10 . chapter 3
would love the mustang sally one to be expanded to a longer fic, really enjoyed these!
Cybernetic Mango 2/3/10 . chapter 2
I must check out this play list. -
Xenophobic Doll 8/29/08 . chapter 3
That does seem like the type of thing Prime would die for doesn't it? Big and noble as he is. With a hot voice. I watched the movie again recently, and, oh man. No one should be allowed to have a voice like that. No one.

Also, the 'Cade centric one. I liked it. I was kinda thinkin that the chick he picked up hitch-hiking was probably a serial killer or what not. It would just be so fitting. Can you imagine? Cade running around killing humans with a human that enjoys it. Now, THAT's spending quality time with someone.

Frenzy Redbull Shudder
Xenophobic Doll 8/28/08 . chapter 2
These need to be longer! GIMMIE! I really liked the one that had 'Hide being the unexpected ladies man. Guess it shouldn't be too surprising tho...what chick doesn't like a nice big cannon?
Xenophobic Doll 8/28/08 . chapter 1
OMG! I love the one that has Ratchet totally rocking out! Also..I can groove on an obsession with Prime's windows. M.. Prime's windows.
Bunnylass 8/25/08 . chapter 3
Oh crap. I've had the most fucked up weekend I could ever of asked for. I hurt like crazy and I can't seem to get myself out of my black mood.

Until this.

Dude, twas awesome! And just what I needed :D

The first one with Jazz, made me go...Oh! Lol, I could imagine him sitting there, watching that and cringing, hehe.

Then Mikaela's one...real life, pure and simple. Just how it should be done.

Then, whoa! Prime died? Fuckin' hell! I thought it finished in the right place though. I don't think you could of added anymore to it :)

Ironhide's had me wheezing with laughter! Oh, shit, what I wouldn't pay to see THAT recording! Who'da thunk? :P

Now that is priceless! Prime, lovin' racing...I WANNA GO! Move aside Will, my turn now! Damn, talk about a thrill :D

Poor Mikaela having them mental images in her mind...I'm not surprised she choked on her coffee! Lol.

The bets on the racing was even funnier! I don't who I wanted to win more. Prime with his stash of highgrade and a weapons clean. Or Hide, so Prime has to admit to Maggie...! It's all funny though!

Again, I thought it ended in the right place. Keeps us guessing and in suspense :D

Barricade and some unknown chick...I don't know whats more...hilarious. Cade trying to run her down, getting pelted with rocks in car mode and in robot mode. Or that he was becoming soft!

Quality stuff here :D

I'm with Ratchet here! Trying to figure out how Prime was holding cards, and winning a game based on lying...AWESOME!

The more crazy it is, the more I get it, lol. You just make Prime much cooler in my eyes :P

Ok, now you've made me feel better :D And that's the last time I ever let a fucking man, throw me across the room, because I was trying to hold him back from a fight.

I'll sic Lena on him next time. And damn my ribs hurt...Men...they're all assholes *grr*

But thanks dude...so worth the hurt, laughing at these :D
Xaniss 8/24/08 . chapter 3
Yay more drabbles! Your ones about Prime where supremely gratifying lol! I did a double take on the Hotrod one thinking "crap is this really about Prime?" lol

To be honest, I kinda thought that Ironhide would be the type to like that style ;p

Personally I would like to see you write more Barricade - I know you *blegh* his drabble (can't remember if previous ones where about him.. mind shot for shit) but I would like to see your take on him. Only cos I know you kick arse when writing and thought it might be funny to see a hell-bent adventure with him involved...

And! I didn't think "slag" would be considered a cuss word - it could be just piss-weak minors thinking their "cool" and "up-with-the-latest" in TF fics if they use it in replies..? HA! Could also be people don't want their reviews censored if they use *shit* or *fuck* in them - so they use slag instead.. only speculating of course, I'm one that's totally not up with the latest or generally know what the hell is going period LOL! Take care!
Dena Gray 8/24/08 . chapter 3
I love the queen bee, piano concerto, and Jesus built my Hotrod fics the best. I loved them all, but those were kickass! :D Prime betting, racing, lying...awesome! (evil laughter) why do we love to torture him so?

Looking forward to OLOBA2 update! :D
story reader 8/24/08 . chapter 3
I got the best chuckles out of the Jesus Built My Hotrod one. It was kind of amusing to picture Prime, of all Autobots, enjoying racing.
Carmilla DeWinter 8/4/08 . chapter 2
You're pretty good at drabbles, really. They made me laugh, at least, and I'm picky.
Bunnylass 8/4/08 . chapter 2
OMG, dude! These are awesome! :D

I don't which ones my fave...Judy getting stoned or Prowl trying to figure out Jack Sparrow...then theres Prime trying (unsuccessfully) to work out the lyrics and meaning of a song...

Then there was Lita and Megs...LMAO, too funny :D

These are wicked! As always you kept it real and totally believeable :)

Kudos :D
Xaniss 8/3/08 . chapter 2
Hehe again this lot is great fun - Malena made an appearance too! Actually that drabble of the Prime washing with Maggie was a dream a friend of mine had.. just with her substituted for Maggie - soapy sponges and all ;p

Sparrow, Beachcomber, Prowl, Elita - yes! The mix of cast can keep those plot bunnies churning out!
Dena Gray 8/3/08 . chapter 2
Ah! I love the hints at Maggie/OP! anything in the wings? ;D

Great job...interesting music LOL I'll have to tune in sometime. :)
Xaniss 8/3/08 . chapter 1
Hehe, this is fun and a nice cross section of drabbles (this being only the 2nd lot of drabbles I've *ever* read...)

Hell - get doped up on painkillers more often as they're great! Short, random snippets inspired by kickin tunes... AND now... onto chapter 2! _
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