O. Cool idear.

a very interesting explaining concerning zell's tatoo. maybe you could write more about this. Hellcat

Wow. Interesting theory, and a great glimpse into Zell (and Bahamut)'s character.

"I take back whatever I said about him being human."

Ha ha! Hilarious!

And you've got a great ending - the last line is very powerful. Keep up the great work!

I kinda like the idea...

but it does need to be continued to make more sense.

You are going to write a sequal, right? You have to write a sequal. Please... _}

Ooooo. Please tell me you're going to continue this. It's beautiful! It's funny, I normally gave Quez to Squall, and Ifrit to Zell.. but I switched this time. Hmm.. Maybe I'll give Bahamut to him this game. _

Interesting...though I wonder why, in my game, Diablos is best with Rinoa...*g* Hmmm...*s*