I like how you managed to put all of Seed into a nutshell in (a slightly emo) Dearka's point of view. It's a very nice piece -- introspective. I'm happy you let Dearka live. ^_^

Argh! all the cutting and all those blood. Oh, how morbid! I was greatly disturbed. Seriously, this fic is really intense. The way you told everything from Dearka's point of view is really good. I especially liked the part about Dearka's relationship with his dad and Dearka's relationship with his friends. I'd say for me, those were the greatest parts.

tnx for the read.

~Kkornelia

This story was really intense. I really liked how you wrote through Dearka's perspective. You did a really nice job. I also enjoyed the ending it was really sad, but you did a really nice job. I really liked Miri's reaction and you wrapped it up very nicely! Great job.