PLEASE write a new chapter you wrote this one in April and its the end of December.
I really want to know what happens. I LOVE Rosto/Beka. Please continue.

oh i cannot wait until you update...please do soon. i understand though, that you have school and other stuff to do, but whenever you get the chance... ;) your story is really great, even if the flow is a little off sometimes and the spelling of regular words is off, but its truly fab!
xoxo Jayme

Wow! I like this a lot! I love how you've added the child. Please update soon!

I quite enjoyed this story. Keep writing. I would sugest adding more sceens like the one with Rosto threatening Bold Brian with the dagger. Rosto just throwing people in the Olorun seems a bit leniant. Don't make it seem like he's going soft. I wait for the next chapter. I am pleased that you have writen somthing of a decent length, as some of the other fan fics are on the short side.

I"m doing this while I"m thinking about it.I loved this chapter and was delighted to see that Piper's Gold had been updated! I loved seeing Rosto's version of events as well as his ear being tugged! I was snickering while I read it. That was a classic right there also very interesting how he came to be in the Rogue and came to love it. Also loved the Foreshadowing. I'll stop now otherwise I'll start babbling about how cool a chapter this was and I don't want to bore you.I will say this though I can't wait for the next chapter!

glad that was cleared up.

I'll start with my one and only complaint - Rosto didn't inquire into Beka's Scanran, nor did he remark upon it. :( That could have been a cute scene.

But. I LOVE everything else. You know I've been waiting forever impatiently or not for this chapter. YAY! I shouldn't have read this right now but I couldn't resist; love this too much not to read instantly!

Fantastic work guys! You are my hit of Pierce for the week! Keep up the great work!

I think that this chapter is an excellently written chapter. But just so you know, you haven't updated for THREE MONTHS! So could you kindly update? Please?

love it. please update soon/

Okay that was amazing. i really like how you keep switching between Rosto and Beka. You Totally had me convinced that Risaph was Rosto's son and he had just never told Beka. Are you going to Tell us more about who Lorena Is? Please do! Now thanks to the dropoff ending, im going to completly stress over what will happen next. WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER QUICKLY!

is there going to be another chapter? it ends with a really big cliffhanger, so please tell me there's another chapter!

Keep it up

I love the one line you put in:
"A slap to the face is an insult. A slap to the back of the head is a wake-up call."
Watch NCIS, do you? =)
Pax out!

YAY! Finally a new chapter! This was great.The one reason i don't mind waiting so long for a new chapter is that your chapters are always wonderfully long