Your writing style is pretty good, I must say.

As for character, well, all I could say is it should be in-game VS in-game or anime VS anime, should not be in-game VS anime. Feel free to open your thought and you will find the truth ^^~.

Anyway, keep good working!

Really well written. And I'm a GeoxSonia fan! XD

Sweet little story. I have to admit, if there's a couple that makes sense in this series it's the Geo/Subaru and Luna couple. I mean it was HER that inspired him to get enthusiastic about the whole Mega Man thing.

One tiny correction though, there's a part where you call War-Rock an FMian, but he's actually an AMian. But I still enjoyed the story.

i found a mistake in your story. in the beginning you say its a sunday, in the end its a saturday.

good story anyway

I finally had time to read this (and I have been looking forward to it, in spite of you). =P

I really like it. What I like about your writing is how for most romance fan fictions, they really skip the character development and start into innuendo, but yours do not but rather dwell on the character development aspect of their relationship. It is really refreshing to read a good romance fan fiction.

=3

Cool Luna/Subaru!

Love it! This is what people look for in LunaxSubaru, and I'm glad it's here to find.

Very cute! I liked this very muchly~