lol, NICE wow i lvoe vincent, and this was good, so dont listen to ANYONE else cause it was cute ...for a hojo lover lol

Ugh... I worte a really indepth review and then my internet died while I was sending it. Buggeration. O.K to summerise: Very impressed that you managed to fit in all of my silly promts; loved your characterisation of Lucrecia (her thoughts on Hojo and Vincent seem perfectly in tune) and your use of the "Bones" line was so wonderfully creepy I grimaced while reading it!

My two nitpicks are as follows: The sentance "It was always a worse and more vicious person" seemed a bit clunky. The word "worse" is rather bland.

Second nitpick: Repitition of "cold" and then "colder" doesn't quite flow.

I enjoyed reading this fic immensely and give you congrats on tackling well the hardest canon pairing in the whole fandom. Good job ;)

Who taught you how to write? A drunken two-year-old?

This steaming heap of garbage could be written by an illiterate illegal immigrant and still be better.

Please, delete this and pray to your deity for forgiveness.

nice,
i don't think that Hojo/Lucrecia is explored enough in fanfics so its a nice change to see someone give it a go.

Oh, this brought tears to my eyes... Short fic, but GOOD!
Good fics draw emotions out of persons, short or long. And this did it wonderfully.

Cheers :D

This was concise and to the point, but also touching. Especially "I wish I could say the same for your father" sentence, within the whole context.

"Do you ant to feel my bones'" - lol, although I'm not sure whether Hojo would actually try to seduce her like that since in the game you can find him on the beach entertaining a bunch of girls from what I've gathered (I haven't played the entire game yet). I mean, i think he actually HAD social skills despite being a crazy scientist (crazy scientist with social skills = even more creepy than just a crazy scientist shudder).

This is such a cute story! I love it so much.

I mean, you never see this floating around. The love that Lucrecia had for Hojo. It was there, it HAD to be there for her to allow him to experiment on her. Where ELSE could it be?

I love this, her talking to Sephiroth, like she has to explain, and Vincent sneaking in anyways.

Great job! Keep on doing what you do best!

Adios!