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Emily Waters
2008-11-20 . chapter 1
Too funny !
whitehound
2008-11-09 . chapter 1
Ignore this: this is just me testing characters for my ffn how-to page.

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DocMartin
2008-10-31 . chapter 1
That was AWESOME! I really like it. Gives Nevilles line in DH 'Snape hated it' (the graffiti) a whole new perspective. HaHa!
Plumbum
2008-08-28 . chapter 1
Hey, I've read the other reviews on this story, and just wanted to add a comment: I'm not a fanfic writer, I read for pleasure in my scarce free time. Usually I save the stories I like on my computer in Word, just to make sure I can return and read them later, even if they get removed from the site for whatever reason.
I copy and paste the text of the chapters, leaving out the author's notes. Only in your case have I saved the explanations either, because i really enjoyed reading about stories of songs, books, explanations of vertain words and their use in the English language. I see hos this may be annoying to some that already know all of those facts, but for me it was an additional pleasure to read. Particularly the cultural references!
So thank you for them :-)
Elsa2
2008-08-20 . chapter 1
That would be his sense of humour, yes. ;-P
cassandra
2008-08-20 . chapter 1
You know, you'd be a hell of a good writer if you weren't so full of yourself.

This drabble, for example, is really funny and well-written. Why do you have to spoil the reading experience by always writing those endles ANs blundering on and on about how great you are and how accurate your writing is?
Intelligent readers WILL pick up those wonderful details you include. Less intelligent readers... well, why bother explaining to them?
Like with that Blast-Ended Skewt drabble, why bother explaining all them facts? It's not like they aren't obvious; nah, you just go rubbing it in that you think yourself more intelligent than the others.

It's not like you're the only person in the world who knows how to write decent (fan)fiction.
Those people who need advice (and btw, you're a good author but you're not that great that your advice is all irrefutable facts. There's quite a few blunders on that page.) won't read that fannish section of your HP anyway, so why don't you stop advertising it all over.

Please do respond. I'm not registered here on but I've given my email addy above and I'd really like to hear your reply.

cassandra
excessivelyperky
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
And of course, using Amycus Carrow's handwriting was the _really_ fun part.
duj
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
LOL, and Neville thought he was fuming! But cleverer people than he have fallen for Snape's po.faced act.
elethian
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
LOL! Good one.
Chemistress
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
Thank you for this scene - just what I feel we have been cheated out of in the last book: what happened at Hogwarts those months under Headmaster Snape.
Alcina vom Steinsberg
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
Great! A wonderful drabble, and a wonderful missing scene. I really enjoyed it! :o)
sunsethill
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
Snort. I would love to see someone do a good job with the students putting together the clues that Headmaster Snape had really been on their side during that horrible year. Of course he knew who was doing all the pranks and mischief! And I agree with the portrayal of Amycus as quite stupid. That's just how I view him, too.
tearsofphoenix
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
Headmaster Snape's missing moment: great!
there are too few of them around, and the light touch of this one is even more a rare thing.
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