The end was great!
Very pretty story!

I like it so far!
Curse time! Well only night time. It keeps me from reading more timelord stuff. Now i'm just being stupid.
Probably a result of sleep deprivation and to much sugar...
I will read more tomorrow!

Wow! A stunning epic, integrating a superb episode with new ideas--easily 10 out of 10 stars! And now for a sequel, perhaps? I'd look forward to it!

I loved it. Totally loved it. I can't wait until her character is brought back (she so totally will!). Ha ha ha.
Macaday me a nut (and you're one too!)

Aw..that was sweet. I love how you write Jenny--I think it's fitting. She's asking the kinds of questions that I think she'd have to deal with. I'm not sure about the whole seeing Time thing though--I was under the impression that was the kind of thing that Gallifreyians learned at the Academy--remember the doctor talking about looking into the Untempered Skism (I know I mispelled that). But ah well...what do I know, I'm an American. That's a minor detail, and I like the thought of Jenny having to deal with it, and everything else is beautiful. Keep up the fantastic work!

well done, you portrayed both Jenny and the Doctor perfectly.

I look forward to your next story.

Loved it!
Loved, loved, loved it.
Beautifully written.

I love this story, it's so awesome! Jenny's a great character and you write her really well, good job!

Lovely. Fantastic, you might say. Either way, this was wonderful to read, and had me grinning from ear to ear at several points (much like the Doctor and Jenny, I suppose) - I especially like the father/daughter snarkiness that comes up now and then; makes the relationship seem quite real.

Thank you for this story. Well told, and a great read. :)

I really love Jenny. ^.^ And this is a Very Good Story Indeed!

if you don't write a sequel i might have to set the shippers on you ;)

in other words, brilliant story, please, please, please, please! write a sequel!

so great! loved it!
though you know, I think the last chapter was a nice ending

Wicked chappie! XD

i love this story! wirte soon!

fanstastic :D i love this story