 Belker 2008-12-26 . chapter 1Really lovely story! You have a great way with words and dialogue and the characters were sounding true to the show. I love it when Murdock bugs Face in the middle of a flirt... But usually it turns out okay for him anyway ;)
Thanks! |
 Shandrial 2008-08-10 . chapter 1What a cute story, I just love Face and Murdock! Heh, the laws of nature... perfect ending. Good story, thanks for posing! |
 Ross7 2008-08-06 . chapter 1Oh...my...I think this is simply delightful!
Extremely well-written!
I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Can't believe it's your very first A-Team fanfic, and I can't wait to read your next one. :D
Thanks for sharing ::high five::
:) Ross7 |
 shadowwalker213 2008-08-04 . chapter 1Definitely liked this - great first story :D
Two little nits - get rid of the "Facey" - Murdock never called Face that ;-) And I'd cut down on the length of the quote - slows things down to a bit of a crawl. But otherwise - very good. |