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Reviews for: A Page Out Of His Playbook
Belker
2008-12-26 . chapter 1
Really lovely story! You have a great way with words and dialogue and the characters were sounding true to the show. I love it when Murdock bugs Face in the middle of a flirt... But usually it turns out okay for him anyway ;)
Thanks!
Shandrial
2008-08-10 . chapter 1
What a cute story, I just love Face and Murdock! Heh, the laws of nature... perfect ending. Good story, thanks for posing!
Ross7
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
Oh...my...I think this is simply delightful!
Extremely well-written!
I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Can't believe it's your very first A-Team fanfic, and I can't wait to read your next one. :D

Thanks for sharing ::high five::

:) Ross7
shadowwalker213
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
Definitely liked this - great first story :D

Two little nits - get rid of the "Facey" - Murdock never called Face that ;-) And I'd cut down on the length of the quote - slows things down to a bit of a crawl. But otherwise - very good.
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