This is starting to be a really good story! Can't wait for an update!

I like the AlxWinry better then the WinnyxEdna idea, but that's just me. I enjoy the story so far. Hope to be able to read more soon. Reechan37

Umm, I'm not sure that I following the plot.

At this point Ed seems to be too insecure compared to what he appears in the anime, that is, how he appears towards other people, not just how he feels inside. As for Roy, he seems both not enough bastard and a bit too much of a one... Eh, what I mean, in the TV-show he's smug, clever, manipulative and always belittling Ed (heh, calling him short) but he never has been deliberately cruel to him either.

I thought that the ending had a nice touch. Am I evil for hoping that it is the serial killer?

Wow, the change between v1.0 and v2.0 is astonishing. I thought that the first story was kind of predictable and the character's seemed a bit too OC.

How ever, in this story not only do the their personality more resemble the canon version but also harder to guess and in the process very entertaining.

Once again another great chapter! Keep up the great work! PLEASE update soon! ^^

There were a few spelling errors like high hills- it's high heels, attracked- it's attracted, and...something else. I can't remember it right now. I read this chapter in small portions between class then just only finished it now since it's after school. Another great chaper! I love this version as much as the first! ^^ Keep up the great work!

Besides a few sentence fragments where it looked like you were going somewhere with a sentence but stopped after the first clause or split up (a) clause(s) with a period to make a new sentence, *takes breath* it twas another great chappie! ^^

Keep up the great work!

Gyah! Sorry it took so long for me to get to reading this. A stupid thing called life got in the way. But anyway, Iluvittopieces! XD It's done very well, though there are some minor errors throughout, emphasis on minor. Though I think there was this one line that Al said that didn't make sense, I think towards the beginning, but I'm not really sure.

Anyway, great job! Keep it up! I'll be keeping track of both story lines. *grins*

this is pretty interesting, can hardly wait 4 the next chapter!
B reading U!

... wa-ai-i-i-it... OnesidedEdna? does that mean that Edna likes Win? but... but... but... I thought she liked ROyoyoyoy1! besides, I like to see how Riza reacts when she finds out Roy's been sleeping with Ed

ooh. *_* Update? YES! I was hoping for s'more fluff of fem!EdxRoy.. D:

I can't believe you stopped there! Please update soon I can't wait for the next installment.

oh, this is getting good! Update soon!

at least the secrets out now and roy can act normal god help edna when winry finds out what she did she would get hit with more then a wrench

So she does tell him!