Lovely story. Loved it...onwards to the sequel xD

OMFG! Im going to read the next part RIGHT NOW!

Raine

Oh you did it now!! You cant leave your poor poor readers on a cliffhanger that big you need to come back here and finish! lol on another less obsessive note I love how you actually changed the ending instead of keeping exactly to the script of the movie it was very original and makes me want to read more!

Poor Elizabeth, hopefully she'll be getting better soon. Seeing as how, Abigail, Ben, and Riley are obviously worried about her. Not to mention, it sounds as if Ian is plotting revenge and plans to get it no matter what.

I'm definitely, looking forward to the sequel. Until then.

poor elizabeth! post the sequel soon!

loved it! poor Elizabeth! update soon!

Hey awesome story cant wait until the next update hope it is soon!

Another great chapter!


"I'd really love not to go to prison. I can't even describe how much I would love not to go to prison." Ben muttered.

"Someone's got to go to prison, Ben." Sadusky replied.

Definitely, one of my favorite lines again.
Hopefully, Elizabeth will be okay from the injury she received while in Ian's company. Also, thanks for the history lesson about Archimedes. Enjoyed it a lot.

Looking forward to the rest of the story. Until then.

Great chapter!


Again, I loved reading this chapter. Especially, this particular part.

"I'm sorry. I'm sorry I dropped you. I had to save the Declaration." Ben rambled to Abigail.

"No, don't be. I would have done exactly the same thing to you." she said seriously.
"Really?" he asked, pleasantly surprised.
"I would have dropped you both. Freaks." Riley said...

Definitely, another one of my favorite parts.
Plus, it's funny to know that they managed to trick Ian into leaving them where the treasure really is.

Looking forward to the rest of the story. Until then.

Great chapter!

One of my favorite parts from the movie is when Riley says,
"Okay. Who wants to go down the creepy tunnel inside the tomb first?"

Definitely, looking forward to the rest of the story.
Until then.

i loved it! update soon! please use my suggestion!

loved it! update soon! i hope you use my suggestion.

Great chapter!

Sounds like Ben is playing by Ian's rules now.
Especially, knowing that he's got not only Elizabeth and Ben'a dad. Can't wait to find out what'll happen next. Until then.

i loved it! you should have Ian shoot Riley but not kill him. it would be an interesting twist. update soon!

Great chapter!

Although, it sounds like the gang has had a rough day.
First Elizabeth gets taken, then the Declaration gets taken, and last but not least, Ben gets arrested by the FBI.
Hopefully, whatever deal that Abigail and Riley made with Ian better workout.

Therefore, looking forward to more. Until then.