 Fleaball 11/11/01 . chapter 3*RoFlMaO* OH... MY... GOD! THAT WAS SO FREAKIN FUNNY! WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *wipes tear from eye, falls off chair* OW! *gets back up* god, i cannot stop laughing! as soon as they put the fave. story thingy back up this is goin right in! *danicing* GO CHUQUITA! GO CHUQUITA! GO CHUQUITA! *LoL* write another ficcy! now! go! *cracks whip* *LoL* im insane, dont b scared... great story! keep it up! im gonna go read more of your fics, k? buhbye
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 T.B. Stormshot 11/9/01 . chapter 1*scratches chin for a moment* Hm, I hate Vegeta, I hate him SO much, more than Chouzu even... so, why do I feel so aggravated at the fact that his personality has become rather... skewed? WHY? Hmm... I think it has to do with the fact that his personality is somewhat like mine, that being why I hate him, and yet can't stand seeing him humiliated, because well, that's like an insult to ME. Don'tcha think...? Huh, okay then, let's actually... REVIEW THE STORY NOW! This was pretty good, funny, better then a LOT of stuff that's been invading the DBZ section nowadays. Only problem was the personalities could use a little... tweaking, I mean, it's nice to see a person being humiliated, but not to the point where you have to change their actual personality to do it. But this is still good, as are all of your stories (as opposed to mine,which are either short or stupid, all 3 of them) *sighs* Okay, I'm done. Oh one more thing, real nice to see ya back Chiquita :) |