This is great fanfiction, Kea and Jett seem to be very good together. Just knowledge I gleaned from getting a feel for their characters. Good story and Encore.

hey cool fic!one of the few ive found with mara in it! Maras my fave charactor in all of starwars!
the idea that earth would be part of the starwars galxy is so crazy it works!
very cool and write more soon!

if you keep writing I'll keep reading

Now that I finally READ this story, I know it is really good. This is so good and the best part is I actually know who all the people are. Yeah for me! Well, great story. Keep it up. And write more soon or i'll have to stalk you at the pool. Brew-ha-ha!

kkep on writing your story is going really well

continue the story you have a good one going on right now

good story, can i have the next piece?

COOOOLL its getting good keep it up

Deathzealot

Member of BDWT (Bulldog Writer's Troupe)

StupidGermanGuy you were so mean (although not as mean as i usually am to VidelCerasiJade). I have an excuse because we live across the street from eachother and are good friends. She knows we have creative differences. Now getting to the review, I liked this one A...uh...I mean Videl. I don't usually like Star Wars fics, but this wasn't too bad. Sorry I'm so harsh with reviews :)

more pleez!

Kinda good writing I would say, its a nice little story (thats quite frienldy from someone like me, cause I usually hate fics with self-made characters like Kea). But who the heck is the father of that Kea girl? The emperor? Well, go on with this, looks cool even after only 3 chapters.

PLEASE CONTINUE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT!

sry, im hyper, but i am speaking the truth

WEEEEEEEE! That was awesome! More, more, MORE! Or i'll uhh i'll do something

I really liked your story. I really liked the part where Mara explains all about star wars. Please write more!