|Reviews for Incomprehensible Desire|
| Carissa 12/4/12 . chapter 2
It's nice to see that Andy has really grown a set. You also show that Miranda has no idea what to do with them. I can't wait to read the rest.
| DarkndAngel9 11/18/12 . chapter 33
This is the end? Why did I think this story was complete? I just. I don't know. This story. I just have a lot of mixed feelings. I really like it. It's great. Not something I would typically read because I love happy endings and this was just not happy ending material. I didn't even want them to get together in the end because so much has happened. It's like you hope something magically happens to make it all better, but it keeps getting worse and worse and really it's just better that these two aren't together. I just want to see them happy and I'm not sure they are there yet. Especially with this ending. Well I'm really glad I read this story. It was fun.
| DarkndAngel9 11/17/12 . chapter 25
Augh! I am loving this story so much, but I need to stop reading now because it is 3am and I need to sleep. I especially feel bad because I left the light on to read and my roomie is sleeping right there. Whoops. But here's a review for you.
This story has kept me hooked since chapter one. I loved it! Then the last couple of chapters came by. I think since chapter 20? I'm not sure, but they've all made my cry and it's just heartbreaking. Andy described it best their relationship is messed up and ugly. I can't imagine being in it. So much pain. And then I thought they were going to separate because Miranda starts saying they have so much negativity it wouldn't work and I'm agreeing because wow, but I want it to work so badly. I'm not even sure if I should feel bad for Aquarius or not. I like her and I know they weren't really in a relationship. Andy knew they weren't exactly monogamous,but Aquarius still slept with others?! And then she goes to Miranda looking like that and I just. I have so many mixed emotions about this story. The beginning was hilarious. All the one liners and I couldn't stop laughing then these last chapters and I can't stop crying. So I'm really hoping for some kind of happy ending with these last few chapters. We'll see.
| bored-random-ness 11/14/12 . chapter 1
i just have to say, "Holy Wow." that has got to be one of the best, expertly written, first chapters i have ever read.
i am hooked already.
| Brithna 2/7/12 . chapter 18
Oh my God! What a complete and total mind fuck! I love it!
| Brithna 2/7/12 . chapter 15
"It was not well known that Miranda had broken her vows of fidelity while married to Alain, and it was even less known that she had broken those vows with a brilliant Broadway producer, who unfortunately happened to be a woman."-WHAT? WHAT? I say again...WHAT? You just killed my brain. (thank you!)
| Brithna 2/7/12 . chapter 1
Holy God -I love it already.
| Thatsxlatte 1/15/12 . chapter 18
"Andy watched as Miranda locked the frontdoor behind them. When she turned back around, her eyes traveled over Andy's body. "I need a drink" she muttered."
That line was beautiful (funny). But I liked this whole chapter. Because of Miranda- and Andy's intimate moment.
Also I thought that they would be together somehow, at the end of this story.
But I was surprised (and actually not amused about) that Aquarius came in it who also had something 'special' with Miranda.
However, this does not take away that you wrote this story brilliantly. I was hanging on this story and really looking forward to continue reading each time I had to stop.
Also the thought that this story should be screened, often came by.
I'm curious if you'd continue or not.
| Cissa-Lycoris-Black 11/23/11 . chapter 33
It's good so far.. I like the interacion with Miranda and Andy, but I honestly don't like Aquarius with Miranda.. I thought it would be a Miranda/Andy pairing, but so far they haven't done anything more than friendship.
I do look forward to your next chapter and I hope that you will continue with this story.
| Harunomiya 4/19/11 . chapter 1
Just finished reading this amazing work...
I must admit that it was mind-blowing. Loved the insight into what motivated each of them.
| anonymouth 3/23/11 . chapter 33
I can remember reading this once before and can't believe I didn't review. Your writing is...phenomenal. You delved so deeply into each character and their relationships not just with others but with themselves that I feel almost completely a part of the story.
Miranda's interactions - or rather Miranda's thoughts on her interactions - with her children particularly struck a chord...I often found myself exasperated with her actions, but then slightly repulsed at her and myself for understanding the fact that, whilst a child's perspective is that you should be the centre of your mother's world, as the mother, you sometimes cannot be bothered with the effort, even though you realise what you're doing.
I felt for all of them at points, but none of them are innocent...I particularly like the pointing out of Andrea's faults as it is often assumed that Miranda is just particularly callous, whereas sometimes it is only Andy's naivety that makes it appear that way.
I just love the insights into the differences between their interactions with each other...we see three different versions of the people that they are, yet still never really get the whole person; neither do they.
I could go on, and on, so I'll stop myself.
I'm just going to say that I think "Like glass, Andy thought again. She could see through Miranda but never touch the contents that were housed within." is my favourite line. It sort of sums up a lot about all of the characters, but especially Miranda as she does seem to be the person that is still stopping them all from positively moving on completely...she lets people go; you don't walk away type of thing.
Is it finished though? It seems like a sort of definite end; I don't see how much more there is left to say if they continue their lives in that vein, but it doesn't say it's complete. I would love to see more, but if not, then I still truly appreciate the tale you managed to so intricately weave.
This is utterly brilliant, one of the best fics I've ever read.
Sorry for the essay :)
| blaqrosse 3/6/11 . chapter 33
i need to see a Psychiatrist after this because after reading all of that good writing, i am left depressed and relating to the characters so much. oh Lord ... please... do not let my life become like any of them. too depressing but absolutely realistic. too real.
i wish there would be a real film made into this. sigh.. Zoe Saldana would be perfect for acting out Aqua. Or maybe Joy Bryant ... oh well damn im depressed like hell.
AMAZZZZZING WRITING.. SAD STORY. You should pay my shrink coz u caused all this depo. lol
| blaqrosse 3/6/11 . chapter 26
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIT... IS MIRANDA sleeping with Aquarius? :( HUUUUH? im confused. i hope not...
| blaqrosse 3/6/11 . chapter 22
try reading this along a song by Vast, called Flames... sighhhhh... Im in love with your writing
| blaqrosse 3/6/11 . chapter 21
wow... right at the end of the chapter when u started with the hate bit my heart froze... ur writing is so amazing .. i LOVE YOUR WORK.