Very cool

LOL What an awesome ending haha time paradoxes are insane!

I'm so happy you did the full story _ I feel like there could be more in the middle areas, but I understand you were just trying to jot your idea down :P

Very nice fic :D Just some grammar issues and the plots a little thin in the beginning/middle area, the rest is great :D

Nice hehe I think that captured the air of SOM really well :D

I love how this chapter ends, with the same conversation with different meaning for Homunculus :D

So he doesn't have power over time for himself, but Eike can use his power to have power over time _

Hmm.. well at least he can still teleport ; and he has all his magic except time travel, it seems..

The beginning of this chapter was kind of confusing, I thought Homunculus was waiting for Eike at the Alchemist's house and there were suddenly stairs he was sitting on..

I love how you voice their tones, especially Homunculus's

"Without giving Eike the chance of voicing his morals, Homunculus continued on with his story." haha perfectly capturing both of them

Homunculus can sleep? XD

Ooh they're such short chapters D: but you're doing well at keeping them in character :)

Just read the first chapter, but it looks good so far I hope the whole thing's on here :P and that you'll go through and fix some of the grammar, . But it looks good! I'll keep reading hehe

That was a very enjoyable story! In my opinion ending A was just a bit more entertaining, but ending B made you think!