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Mr. Evil Eyes
2008-09-14 . chapter 1
awesome! I've always wished Diva & Solomon were a pair! Really gud! We can b frnds u kno...
flowntothemoon
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
This is actually the first fic of its kind that I read (I mean the pairing, DivaSolomon, considering I actually prefer Solomon to be single...heh) but it was excellently written. The character portrayals were beautifully executed. Good job.

You just have to work on the punctuation, though. Just polish that up and this story will be a jewel. I love it beyond words.
lafayette722
2008-08-05 . chapter 1
it was written preety good but i do not like that pairing atall saya/soloman should been together and diva/riku ,saya/hagi and diva/soloman is just not right makes no sense.
Hilaire
2008-08-05 . chapter 1
My, that was awesome.

SolomonDiva is one of my favorites. I so agree with you: Why couldn't they have been a pair?! Geez. Their relationship had so much potential, especially since Solomon is Diva's chevalier.

The fic was excellent, save for a few punctuation glitches. Perhaps you should take a look at them?

Keep writing one-shots like this. I'll be sure to read and review. :D
Willow-048
2008-08-05 . chapter 1
Hey! Guess who? *Grins* This is good. Your writting is getting better. I have a few suggestions & comments, would you like me to email them to you?

By the way is this a one off, or do you have plans for another chapter?
Random Coupler
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
I like the couple. Nice job.
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