that was so sweet!

This so did not suck! I loved it..so sweet I can see Carlisle and Esme doing this! So cute!

Good story! :) Carlisle and Esme don't get enough love!

that was one of the best stories i have read about Carlisle and Esme I have read in a long time. I can definetly see them doing that! Once again, I loved it

This story is brilliant! I am such a hopeless romantic, so this story was perfect for me.

That was wonderful. You have a very fluid writing style, and there isn't nearly enough Carlisle/Esme out there.

Well done!

OHMYGOSH it's so cute. Really. Adorable. I could almost see Carlisle in this one... that's how real it was. ] This isn't fluff... this is, like, literature. Fluffy literature.

Continue! Please.

This is so sweet! Keep up Esme and Carlisle stories. Please... And also, Carlisle, I love you, too! :)

it was good...that last bit was a little weird though...weird isn't the right word...umm...accward(sp?)...

Aww, that was beautiful! What lovely writing. It doesn't suck, believe me.

What a sweet fic!

Perfect!

This most definitely did NOT suck, don't worry. :)

I loved this, just a sweet moment between the two of them. and I love Carlisle making her forget what she was going to say, that's just so perfect and adorable. Thanks for posting this!

It was creative and very Carlisle Esme-ish. It was so good I wish more people wrote about Carlisle and Esme because if you think about it they're not much older older than their "adoptive" children it's nice to read about their perspective. GREAT job and keep up the good work

I LOVED IT! :D

Cute. Very in character. :)