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| Josie Okami 2005-10-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseHa! Your summary was right! You do flatter yourself...but I'm flattering you too, so it works out evenly! Huzzah. *Clears throat* Ok, down to business. Flatter flatter flatter flatter. This was one of those sweet sentiment stories that get me all choked up (or it could've been that Oreo I didn't swallow properly. Who knows!) Congrats, and for doing so good, here's a cookie. |
| lil inu 2005-07-21 ch 1, | abuseWell, the story is pretty good. I am 15 years old and I still like the Swat Kats. I don't care what people say or think. Man, keep up with the good work! |
| Flamable 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuse*snif* *snif* Dude your making me cry! Brotherhood forever! |
| GurardianStar 2003-12-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's an asome story. |
| mango334 2002-11-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is mango334 from neopets, all I can say is wow, no wonder you are so good at rp....... |
| Bexi 2002-02-21 ch 1, | abuseAwww that was soooo sweet. |
| Dragon Trainer 2001-11-16 ch 1, | abuseWONDERFUL! This is fantastic! |
| XSnow LeopardX 2001-11-06 ch 1, | abuseThankes guys(and gals!) I really appreicate this! I didn't think it was that good. I wrote it and finnished it in Social Studies and Science (lol school is boring) and it's the second fi i wrote-my first swat kat one. I WILL be doing one for Razor's POV-and I hope you like it! I just ave to come up with a good idea for it. Thankes for the compliments! :) |
| N'kala99 2001-11-06 ch 1, anon. | abusethis was a very good vignette. i really liked the POV you took. are you going to do a companion piece on Jake's POV? |
| Sage SK 2001-11-06 ch 1, | abuseAwwwwwwwwwwww.... ::goes on and on:: That's so sweet! This is something I picture Chance writing into a book or something. ;) Great job! |
| KS Claw 2001-11-06 ch 1, anon. | abuse::applauds:: GREAT fic!! Keep writing like this!! |
| Kristen Sharpe 2001-11-05 ch 1, | abuseAwww... Sweet story! And, just how I see the two of them too - as brothers. Though this line is a bit odd: "....Razor, the technological genius who sends missiles to every kat he finds." Maybe if you put "bad kat"... Heh, so it doesn't sound like Razor shoots at *everybody*. But, anyways, nice fic! |