Ahh. You just killed me. You just stabbed me in the heart and freaking killed me.
That was so sad...but beautiful. I loved it, in a weird, heartbreaking way.
Good job. Please excuse me while I dry my eyes and remove the knife from my chest.

aww that was really sad but it was really good. great job

That is so sad and beautiful that I nearly cried. It's brilliantly written and it really did make my sister cry. It's beautiful.

Hahaha! I don't think so...

Just...YUCK!

The grammar was quite good, but I didn't like the "moral" of the story per se...

... omg, that was so sad!

Courtney...I cried...that was so sad! Why why why! I love it too much to hate it, but it's sad...