aw so fluffy!

Wow.

I love Mel's weaknesses! And I knew he was going to do that (at the end).

Fluff! :3

As soon as the ball bungee ride came in I was like, "That's just like the fair in Logandale!"
Meh, me and my family go to our Nevada state fair almost every year.
So, after that part, I was imagining the setting to be the fair that I knew.
Oh memories.

Very good on this writing.
The happy Mello was cute. ^^

I also just realized that you have reviewed my fanfic.
Lol.
Im soo stupid.
You're, like, my favorite author on here, and I didnt even relize that you have commented on my fanfic.
Im touched. xD
Anyway, I love reading all of your Matt and Mello stories.
They are so sweet.

♥ Me

Simply beautiful, as always!

Cute!~

Fluffy as pie. Or...cake. A macaroon?
Hm.
Love, love, love. :)

It was incredibly fluffy! Ha ha, but Mello was in character even towards the end and I was smiling the entire time. Thanks for the awesome read, it's definitely going on my favorite list. :)

OH THE PIKACHU! That was utterly perfect-- and I love the making out on the Ferris Wheel thing. There are so many couples that make it look so easy to make out on a Ferris Wheel, but moving in that little swinging seat is kinda scary, especially if you're afraid of heights! (I'm not but my sister is, and she refuses to go on the Ferris Wheel PERIOD)

It's amazing that Matty could make Mells happy about a fair though, I'd imagine it's something only he could ever hope to do. Mel and fairs don't mix very well, unless a very happy Matt is thrown into the equation. Then it's ok. ^_^ And... oh the pikachu... t'was amazing, I'm telling you...

I think I'll stop before both of us get too bored...

haha, Mello pushing away a littl egirl to get chocolate:)

So perfect.

Awh that was so amazingly fluffy and adorable that it made me smile. :D I love carnivals. xD Ironically enough, I saw a Matt and a Mello cosplayer at the last carnival I went to... but that's an entirely different story. xD

Loved and favorited. :D

ADORABLE ^^ omg it made me smile and laugh and be so happy. SOmething I needed after reading some angsty stuff

AW! THAT WAS SO DAMN CUTE! I LOVED IT!

omg this was soo cute. You have to write more or i will surely die!

Okay, this is officially the CUTEST yaoi fic I have ever read! squee!