i like it. we need newcomer/human relatinships in these stories.

I'm very glad to see that you are continuing this story. There are too few fanfics out there for Alien Nation. Anyway, I do enjoy the fact that you are using how humans in relationships with Tenctonese would be targets in their own right for the Purists. Something about being "race traitors" I think was how they put it in one of the movies.

Having said that, the flow was a bit jumpy, you have some very good segments here, but you seem to have a bit of trouble tying them together. Keep plugging onthis story and it will come to you, or you could use the services of a beta reader. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to reading more.

Awesome story. It's well written with few grammatical errors.

More please!

Great story, I love it!

Very good. Please write more. I enjoyed the 1st two chapters greatly.

Oh col!! Seriously! Please, please, please continue!