|Reviews for The Homecoming|
| Regin Ash 9/23/12 . chapter 4
Aw, is that it? Please write more. i know you updated like... a looooonnngg time ago. but hopefully you give it another try. :D
| amoomoo4me 9/13/09 . chapter 4
i like it. we need newcomer/human relatinships in these stories.
| StealthLiberal 6/1/09 . chapter 3
I'm very glad to see that you are continuing this story. There are too few fanfics out there for Alien Nation. Anyway, I do enjoy the fact that you are using how humans in relationships with Tenctonese would be targets in their own right for the Purists. Something about being "race traitors" I think was how they put it in one of the movies.
Having said that, the flow was a bit jumpy, you have some very good segments here, but you seem to have a bit of trouble tying them together. Keep plugging onthis story and it will come to you, or you could use the services of a beta reader. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to reading more.
| Yasunari 11/21/08 . chapter 2
Awesome story. It's well written with few grammatical errors.
| Alucard 1024 10/5/08 . chapter 1
Great story, I love it!
| Jaylithe 8/25/08 . chapter 2
Very good. Please write more. I enjoyed the 1st two chapters greatly.
| ChessurBandit 8/12/08 . chapter 1
Oh col! Seriously! Please, please, please continue!