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Great story!

Lov it

I love the way that Severus has so far behaved towards his newly discovered children. But just how is Severus going to deal with any disobedience from either child? As Serenity is so easily able to read Severus's mind (who's also a master Occulumens)...I guessing that its something to do with being blood-kin? But does Harrison have this ability as well?

Whilst Harrison seems the calmest of the two at least at present, although the sitation suddenly having a father and being at a magic school is probably why many of there reactions are more subdued? Whilst Serenity definitely shares Severus's love of potions...what else do either of Harrison or Serenity share with either of there parent? I wonder just how long before either of them do something that will set Severus off...and what will it be, hmm? It seems as if both of them could possibly be in Ravenclaw...but as not much is yet known about both of them yet? Harrison definitely seems to be a book-worm, but was a great protector of his sister, with perhaps little love/or more accurately little understand of potions?

Well, have them go to Diagon ally. They meet the Weasly's they have a instant dislike for them. Then Hogwarts, Slytherin, Draco, Potions, Troll, Quidditch, books, big dislike between Hermoine Granger and Serenity. Oh and Harry gets sorted into Ravenclaw or Gryffendor.

Merry Christmas (a little late... sorry) Happy New Year. There. Anyway, you should probably start with Severus telling Harry and Serenity that they have to testify at the trial, wither when they're both awake or separately, it's up to you. really well done. I found this story once, but didn't have an account at the time, and have been hunting for it ever since

Lottie

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I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri

wow what a very sad and painful story but it was very sweet now they are back as family! keep it up! i can wait for next chapter come for sure!

thats really sweet, and possibly one of the best things ive read in a long time. i love the way that snape comes over all protective of his children, its how i imagined he would be. please update soon

Lottie

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I like this chapter. It is a good chapter. Please update soon.

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri

I love the story, so I hope you will keep on writing.

i can't wait 4 the next chapter:)

WOW...that sucks. I know I've lost a chapter before and I couldn't remember half the stuff I had in it. lol. I can't wait to read what you add though. Its a great story so far.

good chapter. write more.