Absolutely love it! It's so much better than the horrid stuff found after TDK came out. For one I'm happy that the Joker isn't the main character (even though it's still early) and I'm happy that there's so much depth and detail in your characters. I know it's been a long time, but I really hope you update soon. =P

Jim's characterization was great, I completely felt the angst. There were some heartfelt moments that could be made more powerful if you find your way to do so, but that's up to you and your beta.

You don't have to use more than one exclamation mark, the way you worded it made up for it. :D I love how you also made up for Harvey's lack of costume and headdress with a trench coat and the bleached pigtails.

The imaginary of the torture scene was fantastic combined with that song, which I have never heard in my life, but fits in the grand scheme of things.

Did I forget to mention I'm highly enjoying this fic? ^.^