 Radar180 2009-08-23 . chapter 4you do a good job on these stories, keep it up man |
 OddAuthor 2009-08-20 . chapter 4I like this. It has a sweetness about it; plus it shows the great family dynamic between Timmy and his godparents and godbrother! |
 wee-me 2008-10-08 . chapter 3I absolutely love the family dynamic you have going. Wanda is such a mom in all of this, and Cosmo tries so hard to be a good dad, that they seem like real parents. I also thought you got Timmy's dad spot on. I'm guessing the explosion was Poof related? And was that a Kim Possible reference? I really liked this one and I'd love to see more of these if you get inspired. |
 wee-me 2008-09-20 . chapter 2Snot monsters, glittery or not, are gross, but they fit right in with the FOP world. I think you really capture the characters very well. I feel pretty bad for Timmy, more so even than on the show. So Timmy isn't aware of the weird magic stuff yet? I would love to see more of this, I really like these excerpts. |
 xRedxWinex 2008-09-20 . chapter 2oh snap!! its getting good! I have absolutely no idea where the hell this is going, i can only hope u do cuz i think this is a GREAT story and very well written.
Tchus! |
 wee-me 2008-08-19 . chapter 1I almost think I know what's going on, but then it slips away from me. I thought maybe it was a changeling type situation at first, but I can't tell. I would love to read more of this if there is more to it. You write very well and I think you portrayed Wanda and Cosmo in character but with a lot of depth. The part about the bed made me laugh, you have to love Cosmo.
Oh and I did go read the poem at your recommendation and it was lovely. |
 pokerfacejones 2008-08-17 . chapter 1It was awesome, but I'm kinda confused. ;)
please update soon, so i can understand,. |