I enjoyed this story and it kept my interest until the end. I had a little trouble accepting that Max would leave Logan for the periods that she did, but the story was written well enough that I was able to suspend my disbelief and enjoy the interactions of the characters and the eventual resolution.

OMG! I absoloutely love this story. Not a fault to pick. Usually, I can't get into stories in which Max and Logan end up with a family, but this one does the scenario perfectly.

A beautiful story! So sad to see it end! Hmmm, now you can comeback with a Zack story! Can you tell that I just love the guy?! Not that I don't love Logan ofcourse, but well, he's taken *sniff*!
Anyway, I'll be waiting for more of your BRILLIANT fics!

quite amusing. "sorta happily ever after"? bingo.
Fox sucks for cancealing DA. But hey, we'll get it back.

yep well, i thought i'd read this somewhere before, and now i know. after our big deep and meaningful the other night, i made a point of finding this story, and i must say that its beautiful :) i understand all of it now
keep up the good work

that was so kewl

I'm a bad reader, I didn't review the first time I read this. I enjoyed reading this part very much, classic M/L interaction :)

Didn't have time to long on.
Loved it...
Sorry my review couldn't be longer but my hubby is going to disconnect me.
So cool :o)

Well. I must say once more that I loved this piece. And it really is too bad that you can't edit reviews otherwise I would have said something like....Phoebsfan has lots of fic for you to read. But since I can't edit reviews...I guess I'll just have to live without saying it.

I never expected Max to stay away for thirteen years. The tone of this chapter is very different from the previous one as it should be. Your writing is excellent, love the sights, sounds and smells. You draw me directly into the scenes. My favorite scene was Sam and Logan's meeting. "Daddy?" "Yes." It was absolutely touching in its simplicity.

Wow you gave us an amazing ride in this fic, slapstic, humor, teasing, romance, and passion. It was a stroke of brilliance using the honesty game to bring out Max and Logan's true feelings. Loved Max's response to Logan's answer about the dream. By the way the music is Valse Trist by Sibelius. Great Job!

Well it's about damn time. If I knew that all I had to do was bug you about and post a new fic of my own to get this up I wouldda doneit a long time ago! lol. BUt seriously great job sweets! You're the best. And I would say bipolar is a great description for ya. teehee. Sorry. :oD BUt I do expect to see a new fic from you somewhere in the near future missy. luv ya kid. ~>Amanda

Thanks for that perfect ending to a really good story. You had better come back with a new one...or else! Just kidding, but we do need more M/L fics as you probably know. And you think you've won Mike! Well---we'll just see about that missy! He's mine....muwahahahahaha.....(hehe)
Don't wait so long to write a new fic this time....okay?

So I was reading this and saying, gosh this is good. Wow I can't believe it took you so long to post it though. I still love it. Your right it does leave you feeling all nice and warm inside. Now I'm off to read that fic you told me was the absolute best in the entire world. You know the ones I'm taking about. (Crap is Fun. Give it Away)

It was no waste of time.
Writing never is. Whenever you get the inspiration to write, just do it. Cause like PerciousJax once said to me, you might think your writing is crap but someone else will think it's great. All writing is great to someone.
And you're right, reviewing takes all of a couple of seconds, it gives the author a high for a whole day and then the motivation to keep writing. @-->----