I'm just on chapter 5, now. But you called the owl osmosis as in water diffusion? Ah well, its original.

Good story, :D

You should be very proud of yourself, this story is simply stunning.

I usually don't do blood and gore plots, but... yours was awesome, to say the least. :D

...I'm literally too shaken up to even properly review. I forced myself to read all of this, just to find out the ending.
Crap...that was...disturbing...
-mind scrub-
I pray for no nightmares. But you're a wicked awesome writer!

where, I see nothing else this is the last chapter.

catwriter

*removes his Jaw from the floor*

BLOODY HELL!

You are full of surprises! In the positive turn i mean.

Please continue the story very very soon.

Huh! I don't get it. Please explain this one. Replaced with what?

where did he get his money?
why didn't he have more time to adjust to real life the whole get out of jail thing didn't play put well

I've seen 'harry has a twin who they think is the boy who lived' fics
and 'harry sent to azkaban' fics
but both and going at six...off to a good start

Hihi... I seldom browse through the Harry Potter fandom. I generally like dark fics and the darker the better. Mind telling me where you get your inspiration from? I am kinda curious after reading through three chapters.

I did NOT like the end.
Pity the time I wasted on a good story that fizeled (sp)out.
I hoped to read gore and REVENGE mayhem and REVENGE ,sight...

Take care

Nicol

whens the next chapter going to be out?

Nice story though I assume you know the last 2 chapters where rushed to the high havens (though the whole story was rushed to a good extent) and what was up with Granger attacking him? I thought she was his slave willing to do anything for her next ‘fix’? Killing the hand that feeds you would not be a way to do it, and being as how she was not dead she was still on the potion.

So much more could have been done, the Potters trying to bring him back in to the family but no they let Dumbls dictate where he went ‘number 4’ how they let that slide. . . I will never know, then again they still worked for him after he sent their six year old to Azkaban so I guess it is in the realm of reason. Has anyone told the Weasleys you can skip the first 2 years of Hogwarts (think of the money they could have saved) and be expected to do the work of a third year even with the schooling of a neglected self taught 6 year old? What is that first grade? No social skills, no education… NO problem, he will be fine.

“MR. POTTER, what do you mean you cannot read the text book that will be detention writing lines with me tonight.” “MR. POTTER what do you mean you cannot spell ‘I should have learned to read before I went to prison’?” Oh wait, never mind he was reading advanced theory books at 4 years old.

The war: he killed his brother 20 words later he is finishing the day long duel with Dumbledore two years in the future, then Hermione (his mindless slave) manages to do what the whole light side could not kill Shadow. Where were He, She, and It? Eating some bodies? Why did he not have a small army of those un-killable killing machine things at the end? He could have turned his brother in to one or used that not so great slave potion on him. If you can safely prolong revenge it is cooler than (slit » dead) not so cool. Where is the satisfaction in that?

Chapter 9 I reviewed that I was looking forward to seeing where the story was going, I did not realize it was 90 percent over already (who would have?).

Having said that, thanks for taking the time to write the fic, we all know you do not have to do so, so I do appreciate your time spent for our enjoyment. I hope you view this as constructive criticism and not a flame. Lots of ‘meat’ was missing from this that could have made it a much better story. Hell the first 2 deleted scenes would have made it make more sense.

Hm, interesting story, though I don't like that you killed Harry, and so violently too! Other than that I enjoyed the story!

I must admit to disappointment. the ending was great and all, but you just suddenly jumped from the beginning to the middle.