i love this, it's so sad but heart warming at the same time...

dont u dare say this sucked! i love it!

Wow, this was some amazing writing. The story was so tragic, but it ended without chaos. A great read. Thank you for it!

That was so beautiful...it was so was really good and I liked it alot.

oh my gosh. if my brother weren't next to me, i'd be bawling.

...That...was...amazing! If i could cry i so would have during that story. It was a winner. WAY TO GO!

the one and only

it was so beautiful. yeah i no that sounds corny.:P But i was listening to the elfen lied song(lilium)and it really fit the song. so basically...i started to cry...lol

Oh gosh i'm crying.

This was really beautiful!

So sad. Amazing. This is different from anything I ever read. Wonderful one-shot!

damn this is a good end it would be perfect for the end of naruto shippuden when they die interesting huh?