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Simply Sarah
2009-06-10 . chapter 14
I finally got to read the end and it was SO worth the wait! I love how you despite the fact that most last chapters are all happy-go-lucky and super fluffy, you went with something more realistic. It was so Crellie- well the Crellie in my head. And I loved the way you only semi-resolved their problems- making them aware of them, but also aware of the fact that it would be something that would always challenge their relationship.

Also, I loved the song. How can anyone not love "Love Song"?

It was perfect. Thank you for writing this AMAZING Crellie story!

Sincerely,
Sarah
XALLOWspuffyBuFf
2009-05-14 . chapter 14
Wow, just wow. That was definitely a true Crellie ending. This story is good in so many different ways that it's unbelievable. Plus, you have a very good taste in music. Green Eyes and Lovesong are a couple of my favorites as well. Can't wait for updates on motion picture soundtrack!
poeticgrace
2009-05-13 . chapter 14
Love this story, what a great ending! Wonder why you picked this song to end with? ;) Adore.
Rexxx
2009-03-08 . chapter 13
I like that Craig just keeps on surprising Ellie, I think that's extremely cute. The relationship between Craig, Joey and Angie is so wonderfully portrayed in this. I had a smile on my face throughout the entire chapter.

Being a Canadian, I have to point this out. Driving from Toronto to Calgary, without any stops or anything, would take like a day and a half, it's basically driving across the country. Other than that, though, it was great chapter!

I can't wait for the last chapter!!
Simply Sarah
2009-03-08 . chapter 13
I've been sick. The kind of sick where your mind is fuzzy and you can't concentrate for more than thirty seconds at time. So, until I felt better I didn't bother trying to read this- even though I really wanted to read it- because I knew it would take me forever.l

So, I was already feeling slightly better, but now I'm feeling much much better. A Crellie proposal? You just made my weekend. And it was so perfectly done too. Plus, I really liked the back story on Craig, Joey, and Angela since they've been sort of left out of this story.

Anyway, wonderful job! I'm eagerly awaiting what will unfortunately be the last chapter:)

Sincerely,
Sarah
poeticgrace
2009-03-06 . chapter 13
Do you know how much I love this song? This was a really sweet story, purely fluff but in the best way possible. I love how much thought went into it and seeing the family interaction.
Rexxx
2009-02-28 . chapter 12
This chapter was so nice. And that Craig wanted to surprise Ellie with all of that is cute. Crellie conquered some of their communication issues and other problems, and moving in together seems like the perfect next step for them. Your characters seem so real, I know I've said that before, but it's true, and this chapter is such a great example of that. Awesome! Can't wait for more from you!!
Simply Sarah
2009-02-28 . chapter 12
I had to wait so long to read this chapter (a whole day it sat in my inbox). It was like torture.

But, oy, do you know how to make something worth the wait:) I loved the chapter! I was smiling through so much of it that my mom- who was in the same room as me- asked me what was going on (she thought I was still calculating my students' grades so naturally there was no reason to be that happy). I explained to her that I was reading something original about two of my favorite characters that was utterly delightful and something that should have happened on the show (damn writers) was perfectly executed in fanfiction.

Oh and the song was a lovely addition to the chapter; perfect really.

And I loved Ellie's answer to whether or not she was moving in. A simple yes wouldn't have seemed as in character as your response.

I'm looking forward to the next two chapters, though I am so sad that this story is coming to a close.

Have a great weekend!

Sincerely,
Sarah
poeticgrace
2009-02-27 . chapter 12
This definitely was a sweet little chapter. It felt very authentic to me, both for the characters and for real life. I like the way he set up the surprise and the fact that he wants her to feel at home. Just so adorable!
Simply Sarah
2008-12-23 . chapter 11
This was a fantastic chapter!

First, I loved the song. Seriously, I'm a big Perishers fan and I've considered using "Pills" for fanfics myself. Plus, I thought it fit the chapter very well, so that made it even more enjoyable.

Second, I love how you managed to make the chapter sweet and angsty all at the same time- it seems very Crellie.

Third, I can't wait to see how the story ends- though when it does in three chapters and an epilogue I will also be very sad and missing your Crellie fics.

Wonderful job! And Happy Holidays!

Sincerely,
Sarah
poeticgrace
2008-12-23 . chapter 11
Happy and sad and confused and assured all at once. Plus it has Spinner, and you know how I feel about that. Honestly, amazing song choice. Perfect for this vignette and for who they are in the story. Plus, it's like an actual update! Hehe.
Rexxx
2008-11-27 . chapter 10
UPDATES! I'm so glad. This is my response to chapter 9 and 10. Both were better than I expected, and the plot turned into a nice and happier resolve than I would've predicted. I love the Ellie and Spinner dynamic, but ESPECIALLY I love the Crellie in these chapters. There's so much development of their relationship in these two chapters. I LOVE IT!
Simply Sarah
2008-11-25 . chapter 10
It took me a second when I saw my penname at the beginning. I was like, I recommended a song? It sounded like me and I do own the song, bu it must have been so long ago I don't recall why I suggested it. Huh. Anyway, I'm glad it worked out.

I loved the chapter. It was definitely time Craig got his head out of his **-and hopefully it will stay out of there for the remainder of the story.

Oh, and by the way, I love your Spinner, he's awesome.

By the way, it's good to talk to you again to. My IM name is on my profile (somewhere), feel free to contact me anytime (I'm actually on now even). Hope all is well with you too!

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter:)

Sincerely,
Sarah
Simply Sarah
2008-11-25 . chapter 9
First of all: Welcome Back! I was so excited to see this update in my inbox. I've definitely been going through Crellie withdrawals.

Second: Really, you had to end it like that? Ah, I appreciate the cliffhanger, but it was just so compelling and I'm absolutely hoping that the next chapter isn't months away (though it's perfectly understandable if it is).

Third: As always I loved how perfectly you captured both Craig and Ellie. You're just so flawless with them.

Fourth: I'm a Kooks fan, so I loved the song choice.

Fifth: I'm looking forward to the rest of the story and the oneshot. Or any more Crellie from you really.

Wonderful job!

Sincerely,
Sarah
poeticgrace
2008-11-24 . chapter 9
Is it bad that the end of this almost made me wish for Spinner and Ellie? Anyhow, this is the right combination of melancholy and bittersweet. Lovely.

Alright, gotta go see my boy, Billy.
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