Brilliant! I actually think this is perfect just the way it is. Wow you are really talented at writing the physical stuff. I'm still just a beginner. :op I really loved this and I can't wait to read more of your work.

Right, uh... Where to start... I LOVE YOU *clears throat* Ok, now that I've probably just freaked you out, I'd like to seriously let you know that I have come to adore this fanfic (and am greatful that it wasn't left as a one-shot), because the way in which you structured the events and captured their personalities was totally amazing.

This is definitely a fic that I would sit and re-read; even if I had to sit in the dark to do so. ^_~

*throws pillow* damn it i dont want it to be the end! ugh your so mean. :3 *throws more pillows* lol

I LOVE IT! You are amazing!

Ah... That. Was. Amazing.
You wrote their personalities incredibly well and how you managed to entwine their heart-felt emotion--Simply magnificent~!
I'm much pleased by this ending, very sweet, short and fitting.
Thank you so much for writing this :3

xMDx

...i am speechless because I'm soo busy squealing! I thought this story was great...until I read the very last sentence...now its so unbelievable incredible...holy crap. you...you are so amazing. I can't even express my love for your orokabus. I'm not a fan of them actually being in love...i just like the lust aspect. but that...i can't stop squealing. omg. I love it. I love you.
and lol the second chapter the whole time I kept wanting sasuke to walk it. I'm not sure why...i just wanted to see his reaction. lol that would be funny.
great work! its all so emotional! an sexy!

'Because he sure as Hell wasn’t going to be the one to say it first.'

lolsolols!! u r VERY good at this, perhaps TOO good.
talk about want and need, jees. ur stories rly drive me crazy.

That was a good sappy ending love it... I think it will be something Orochimaru will do just to exert more power over ppl... Arigato

OMG that was so fck awesome... now only if you could make Sasuke long for Naruto it will be like perfect...

arigato

My goodness I wanted to get inside the computer somehow just to take a peak at Kabuto and Orochimaru's love making... damn your god... I love Kabuto and Orochimaru...


Arigato

-squee- that was by far, THE BEST orokabu story i've ever read! and the part with kabuto as seme... well that was just ... amazing. totally purely amazing! and i love the subtle amount of fluff that's added into this story. really, its just the right amount! ^_^ so yeah. fantastic story!

*throws pillow* SEQUEL!! ^_^ It was beautiful, hun. You made them both perfectly IC, and Sasuke way too damn close. Words can't describe how awesome this was, and I just can't help but rave over it. It's so freaking amazing!! ^_^ Fav!

*nosebleed*

you can wright i dont like this pair the best but i do love oro sama if you could do me a faver as to wright a fic about oro sama and sasuke that would be asome. the best part about kabuto is he really does love oro sama (oro sama mine no tuch) creep. good story loved it. (no clue how you can wright that long?)

WAH! *throws pillows* how dare you finish it! I think I like this one even more that 'The art of being used'! (I'd favourite it, but I don't want my friends to find out that I like OroKabu ;) sh)