 amanda 2008-10-06 . chapter 5 I cannot beleive you arent going to finish this story!It is an awesome story and I loved the first story,first kiss.I'm pouting here now! |
 Jeremy Shane 2008-08-27 . chapter 5good chapter & more please |
 Curley-Q 2008-08-26 . chapter 5I love thqt Rory and Jess are back together and happy! I just hate that it took Rory being upset about her father's impending marriage to Sherry! Please continue soon! |
 Mrs. James Harold Potter 2008-08-26 . chapter 5I really like this story. But here's some constructive criticism: try not to make everything so perfect. In real life, people don't just kiss and make up just like that. Or maybe that's just my life. :P
Great chapter, and I can totally relate with being busy with school, I definitely am, I go back in exactly one week from today. Either way, I still think that if Rory and Dean got together (no matter how much I despise him and think he's an ugly twit), it would make the plot a LOT more interesting. Of course, Jess and Rory would get together afterwards, but it would make their reuinion even better. :)
Keep up the good work though!
~Mrs. James Harold Potter |
 frequentlydazzeledbylit 2008-08-25 . chapter 5aw i think thats my favorite chapter YAY!1 they made up! YES!1 so happy. this day keeps getting better and better.
-A :)
oh and UPDATE SON! |
 I-Luv-Jess-Mariano 2008-08-16 . chapter 4OO you are realy good at those stupid cliff hangers!!
More Please And SOon ! I hope they get back together and dean gets hit by a bus or something for his stalkerish tendancy's!! |
 01GGfan 2008-08-14 . chapter 4Great chapter as usual! :) Very long fight I have to say, much longer than I would have expected, but it worked.
"Rory remembered why she was mad at her dad. He had failed to show up to check on her when she was lying in a coma after being shot" Seems like something you wouldn't forget- getting shot and all that. Still, Chris isn't in her life so I understand how she culd have forgotten. Just thought I'd tell you that.
Anyway, great chapter! Really looking forward to the next. Update soon! |
 mouse2793 2008-08-14 . chapter 4two months?! are they still technically dating? o please update asap! |
 Jeremy Shane 2008-08-14 . chapter 4good chaapter & more please |
 kylielink 2008-08-14 . chapter 4great more soon |
 frequentlydazzeledbylit 2008-08-14 . chapter 4AH COME ON NO CLIFIE! UPDATE SON! AND GET THEM BACK TOGETHER! MY GOD! haha
-A :) |
 Maygen Lauren 2008-08-14 . chapter 4THEY HAVE TO TALK!
PLEASE! THEY HAVE TO! A NICE "HAPPY" TALK.
Okay im done freaking. Have I mentioned how much I hate Dean. I hate him.
Okay... well Jess and Rory need to get back together NOW!
Cause I'm sad :(
Update as soon as you get a chance! |
 Curley-Q 2008-08-14 . chapter 4Great job, I cannot wait to see what Jess will have to say to Rory! |
 I-Luv-Jess-Mariano 2008-08-12 . chapter 3EGh!! you can't just say disaster struck and not tell me what the disaster is! I have to know!!
UPdATE SOON!@! |
 01GGfan 2008-08-12 . chapter 3Good chapter, looking forward to chapter 4. I must say you really paint Dean out to be annoying! I admit that Jess is my fav guy, but I like Logan too. I'd say Dean was the worst, but the best 1st bpyfriend. Anyway, what I'm trying to say is don't worry about not knowing where its going, just write as it comes to you becuase you're a good writer and i love First Kiss and this sequel!
haha. |