 Ganheim 2009-05-20 . chapter 3Stranded In Time - Stone Age 65 Million BC:
[Sigh. It _was_ an interesting idea, but after a couple mere paragraphs it suddenly devolves into a summary as if instructions for someone else, instead of doing the work of writing the narrative yourself. The fact that the other chapters look to be the same without even an introductory paragraph or few doesn’t help] |