Riti, how could you? *sniffs* now I have to go read something cheerful...but it'll be one of your stories, I promise.

Well.
To be honest im so glad it didn't unravel like that.
That must have been one of the most depressing fics ive ever read.
no love, no friendship!
POOR ELPHABA.

gosh put me off Fiyero,
I need to read some Fiyeraba now.

Greatly written though. Thats why its so moving.
love it, in a hatered kind of way lol x

That was...very depressing is all I can say. Um, short though it was I can't help but feel...wow one moment can really change everything. Though that was the point of the story, heh. Must read something a little lighter now.

This does nothing but reenforce my love for Fiyeraba. It prooves that it makes everything all better. It makes them both happy, and keeps them from dying.

Wait. That last statement doesn't apply to bookverse. Oops.

xoxox
Tiggy

ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-HA
Galiyero ROX!
Nice job, btw

*jaw drop*

Fiyero = mean = fighting = being alone = death!

Look what happens when he doesn't fall for her!

I actually rather liked it. Especially the beginning, how it switched.

Fiyero shook his head. “I haven’t seen her today. But she did a great job, you should wear your hair down more often. You might actually catch someone.” He reached to take a piece of her hair, but she moved away.

“Of course you’d take her side, Master Tiggular.” She stood up and walked to the other side of the room, in the front, where she took a seat. Fiyero started to move towards her, but the class was called at the time, so he settled for the seat in the back where she had been sitting before.
>It's so different from what transpires in the play, but there's still a Something there, that then gets shot all to hell because he ends up embarrassed due to her spell.

An interesting look at things from another angle, well done!

d~