This looks very good. I say this at the end because I have a tendency to read things backward. ("I always read the last page/instead of the first one"-Where Do I Begin, Idina Menzel)

that was really a good end to the entire fic Like it alot (well more than like it coz thats me beign modist I BLOODY LOVED IT =])

*cries* I can't believe it's over. I am so happy Fiyero went to visit Avaric :} Haha Fiyero may be brainless, but he is very good at playing mind tricks xP I enjoyed reading this story so much and I am sad to see it go. Thanks for sharing it with us and ahmazing job!

Have I mentioned how much I enjoyed this? I did, immensely! Can't wait for your next fic!

Great finish, I'll miss this. And, yay for Shakespeare crossovers! =D

Aww. I loved it, Riti-Twin, and I'm sad to see it's over... Now where's the next fic?!?! LOL.

Eef. The thought of Disney getting it's paws on Wicked. Bleh.

Great job!

xoxox
Tiggy

I am so very happy that you didn't end the story at chapter 14.

xD I'm glad Elphaba bought his letters and then sent them back to him. I'm also glad that Galinda wrote Wicked. Or well, the musical verse of it I guess :/

xD Avaric's playing Fiyero, that's kinda funny to think of. So then the Oz play of Wicked is a mix of Traitor and Wicked? More Wicked I'm guessing, if it's mostly about Elphaba. This sentence though, "It was crooked, much like the one the Wicked Witch bore on the posters advertising the play", tells me that it's just Wicked xD

But why are Ozians still calling her Wicked Witch? :/ I mean, they have a musical about her, you'd think they learned her name by now XP

I thoroughly enjoyed this fic! I just read the entire thing in an hour and loved every minute of it! You are an exceptional writer.

Poor Avaric is all alone now D: I am sad that this story is almost over now D: It has been such an amazing story so far and I have really enjoyed reading it. I will be sad to see it go. I am looking forward to the next chapter... even though I think it's the last... Please update soon :}

*sad*

Even knowing that Yero and Elphie are OK, it's still sad. Av's in the same boat as Glinda. *pats Av*

It was great!

xoxox
Tiggy

LOVED IT!
Is it over now?
:(
please let there be more!

I feel like such a geek because I have tears in my eyes. that was just wonderful. more than wonderful. fantasticly brilliant. even those words dont quite cover it. =]

This is really fantastic- was happy to fav it, you deserve it- this is a unique perspective, and not to mention very well handled. Great work! :)
~Grace

Fiyero actually does do the dance at the very end in the middle of the crowd so it's hard to see.

*hugs*

Meh. I love Fiyero. I've got mind mush right now, induced by the promise of a three day weekend. I'll say something coherent next review.

xoxox
Tiggy