 Captain Faris 2003-10-12 . chapter 3 No, Jessica doesn't die, and neither does Elliot. A pity, eh? I always wanted Lise and Hawk to get together, and I was never sure how things would end up between Hawk and Jessica. I loved the moment in the game where Hawk impulsively kisses Lise (if she's in your party and he isn't, it happens when you hit Rolante). Anyway, this is a very weird story, a bit out of character, but fascinating nonetheless. Write more. |
 Lurial 2003-06-07 . chapter 3I really, really enjoyed reading this. Especially since there are so few Lise/Hawk stories out right now. Please write more chapters. ^_^ |
 Talec Arashi 2002-09-18 . chapter 3Hmm, very nice.. |
 JojoDark 2002-04-20 . chapter 3Oi CONTINUE! CONTINUE! There is few Lise+Hawks fanfics and theres even fewer good ones!(snickers) This looks like it's gonna turn into a lemon...Well..IT DOES!@_@...I MUST SEE NEW CHAPTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR! |
 lololno 2002-03-22 . chapter 3Wow, you really haven't played the game. Hawk jumps at every chance to kiss Lise, and I'm not kidding.
Wait, Jessica doesn't die. *blinkblink* Hmm. I don't remember her dying, anyway . . . @-@
Of course, I was playing Lise, or Carlie, or Duran.
Wait, but you're playing Angela. *confused* *falls over* *twitches a bit*
^^ This story's as good as the other one!!
But I have problems reading romance fics with Hawk in them . . . Yup, jealosy.
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 Kitsune no Kishi 2001-12-16 . chapter 3Concidentally, last night, I found myself in a full angst mood. And that and my current muse (namely, one Hawk of Navarre) drove me to writing but unlike yours it takes a decisive super-human effort for me to write anything coherant that's so... so... dark. And good. So bravo. |
 TIMES 2001-11-24 . chapter 3HI!!! WOW!!! I love ur fic~!! please keep writing! I can't wait! |
 Tiger5913 2001-11-15 . chapter 3Ooh, Lisawk. Very nice indeed. I like the angst mood. ^.~ |
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