Very insightful piece.

Just short of perfection.

You put an image in my head without even having to do so in writing.

I imagined this as Kaiba, sitting in a dark corner, when he finally snaps.

Very, very nice and very honest and raw.

I really liked your choice of words.

Visual but not so.

Short but to the point it's really well written Jas. The emotions were really keen as well. It was as if you could feel it if you tried to.

-Dark

WOW! You hit the nail on the head when you wrote this one. Seto really needs to look deep within himself and see what's there before he can find that little ray of hope that just might bring him the happiness he wants. He has to find Anzun and beg her forgiveness and maybe then and only then will he finally find the peace and love that he so desperately wants. I loved reading this story.. I'm adding this to my favorite list.. Great Job..