liked it

does nessie have a have a kid. plz tall me what happen next to jacob and nessie .and what happen to her family .

awwww! this is do adorable.

Aww ! ! ! That's so sweet !

perfect just how i imagined it

Aw... really cute story. At the end especially there were some really beautiful phrases.

Oh I love it so romantic!

"I will love you till ever single star goes out in the sky" Cute!

Aww, that was very sweet. I especially liked the 2013 scene. It made me tear up.

aw, that was absolutely adorable. the wedding was a wee bit cheesy but wonderful nonetheless. and jacob/nessie fanfics are the best. they're so cwutee!(L)(L) 3

i specially love the first part, cuz there isn't many jacob/young nessie fics and i'd love to read about that.

greetings!

OMG THIS WAS SOO GOOD!

Hi Lostxinxthexmusic!

I really liked this one-shot, it was refreshing, funny, and easy to read. I had a great time reading it ;). I loved how you picked different moments from Nessies life and showed them through Jacobs eyes. Jacobs my favorite character from the Twilight series, so I was definitely happy when I saw a story from his point of view (so far Ive only seen Nessies POV fanfics).

And just as a little comentary, I think the last part, the one about the wedding, wasnt even necessary. I would have preferred for you to maybe write more about other Jacob and Nessie episodes than that last one. But overall, it was pretty good!

Im going to see if you have more Jacob and Nessie stories, so I can read them :). Hopefully youll write more about this couple, please, because you do it very well. I even think that you should actually write a story, not just one-shots...

Keep the writing up because you have a lot of talent, so dont ever stop!

Cassio

AW! they're so cute!

*Sniffs audibly* That was... beautiful! I've always been hesitant about the Jacob/Nessie pairing, but this was so amazing that it would be cruel of me not to favourite! Please keep writing- you're going right to the top of my favourtie authors list!

Oh, well done! Excellent! Best part was the way you described Nessie proposing. It's different, and very... I don't know. I just really like the idea.

You've but Jacob very much in character. And no ones too over protective, or anything. It's all very easy and light.

I really like your portrayal of Nessie. You did a wonderful job with her.

Keep up the good work. It's an excellent story.

10/10

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