I LOVE IIT! AWESOOME!

wow.
that was a beautiful story :)
Amazing Job :)

aww so sweet

I LOVE it! that's about all i can say, (in a good way!)

Hey, this is a pretty good story! The only problem I see with it is that the human body dies once it hits a 108 degree fever, so it's a little medically incorrect. Other than that, I really enjoyed your writing!

that was really great! this is the first Host fanfic I have read and I LOVED it! Now I am going to go see if you have anymore out there. Again great job!!

I LOVE IAN

This story, while it was adorably sweet, was amazingly depressing by showing every human that they themselves are neither indestructable nor facing an aternity of years. I don't like thinking that but this story was really good

this is super good i like your writing style.
keep it up

you are actually an amazing writer.
you are so talented,
this is probably the best host fanfic i have ever read, and i've read most of them..
you are an amazing author, keep writing!
x

That was AMAZING! One of the best Host Fics I've read!

That was really good! I loved it! Great job!

This is my third Wanda/Ian fic that I've read, and I've liked all 3. Lol. This actually made me sort of sad. But it's because of how you portray "time". All in all, I love it! Good job.

AMAZING! This was absolutely enthralling, brilliantly written!

Marvelos piece of work! Great "host" fanfiction, and the first I've ever read. It was very well illistrated. Your grammar could use some work however. I suggest a Beta.