Omg, that was so sad! I was listening to it on the speakers as I read this! *sniffle* Nice work!

wow! that song is brilliant and your fic goes really well with it, soad are wicked and it would be kewl if lucas listend to them

joxer, don't worry about what anyone says about the lyrics. people are just anally retentive that way:p also. you did a great job. i love it. seriously, dude, goosebumps and chills. love ya

i like the song, i liked the fic . . (i don't really care that you screwed up the lyrics. . . it's not exactly the clearest song in the world and we're all only human). The thing is, i don't think all that deep reflection works for this song, since the song goes so fast and yet he seems to relfect so much. But hey - he is a quick thinker ;) Good fic overall anyhoo, keep writing.

OMG! sorry for mixing up the lyrics... i should have doubled checked them... Jess, ya forgivien! But to all, sorry...:)

I just wanted to let everyone know that I found the lyrics to the song at , but if they're wrong then that's my fault, not JOxER's, cuz I was the one who found them. Sorry for the inconvenience!

um you know, its "hide the scars to fade away the shakeup" not "I just crossed the feeling with a shakeup."

that's great, and that's a really good song - but will someone PLEASE tell me what the hee-haw seaquest iz. like all these people like it, and i'm like riiiight. so maybe i woulda liked your fic better if i knew what it was you were talkin 'bout. yeah, that would probably help bunches. k, shuttin up now. :)*

You are becoming a better writer, I have seen the improvements but the story is confusing. You really trashed the song from System of a Down.. I hope they don't read this fic because they will be disapointed. I know I was and many people here feel the same way. Don't quit you day job...

Wow, chica. That was...Powerful.

Great job, JOxER! I love the finished product! I can really feel Lucas' emotions. Very real, very good :) It almost makes up for you turning me into an elephant that can't fly ... Maybe some neon stickers would help ...