i liked it but it made me cry when luke came im like ** off dumass go die in a ** hole

Why the cliff hanger? Why? WHY?

weird . . .
but i like it even though it's sad :)

please continue? I must know what happens next e_e I will be awating the next chapter eagerly
nice writing style btw :D
it compliments the tone of the story nicely o:

this is going to have a 2nd chapter... right!?!

please update soon!

That was good! I love cliffies! Continue, please!!

agh im gonna die if i dont kno wat happens i luv this story all ready and its only the first chapter i cant wait to see if annabeth joins kronos' army and is kronos in lukes body yet?

evil person what is he pplanning update soon really likke presequel

R u gonna write more?

I HATE cliffies. Continue I love the angtsy tragedyness to it.

That is really sad... Liked it though.

Pleease update soon.