Ahh, I really loved this. It was amazing, nice work!

One of the few CloudLeon's that I actually enjoyed.

Well Done, Yondy. Sorry the review's a bit late.

Nurse-Nurse? eh? EH? =D

Du'h...don't tell Yonder, but I read this and ran away like a buffoon without leaving even a single character.

Times must change! I am here now! *stands to and salutes* Commencing Operation: Hearty Review.

Well I must say, it is obvious you spent a large quantity of time on this piece of deliciousness. The beginning was delightfully graphic, enough to make my toes curl 8D

It was lovely how it all built up into a crescendo of fighting and then when the calm hit, there was this: "No..." breathed the brunet. It was wonderfully paced and hit like a ton of bricks after all the blood and brutality.

I didn't expect Leon to die but I'm glad he did. It seems like a climactic scene in the grand scheme of things and would be a lovely ending...lovely in a very loose sense 8D

I liked the flashback; I loved Leon's reactions to feeling watched and then grabbing Cloud and the small amoutn of banter to size each other up, tres magnifique!

Sorry for my utter crapness, I hope this is sufficient. If not, I will grovel at your feet...and demand more Nurse Nurse at the same time 8D

This was beautiful, stunning, all the emotions, and the way you make Leon and Cloudy witty and calm, totally in character, loved it, you are a genius.



~Wuv the Playfulness*

Wow. When I think of AU, it's usually something simple like putting the KH gang in college. This is lightyears beyond that. The best thing about your AUs is that The Boys are always The Boys, whether they're doctors, assassins or taxi thieves. Keep up the good work!

This is absolutly great! Your stories always keep my interested!

That was a pretty epic dream you had there. I cried.

Hello you! ^^

A dream, hum? You'll have to tell me about it ^^ Was it invisible seks? XD

I like how you don't bother giving us the setting the context, what lead to this, what it the Operative, who is the old man, why is Cloud naked ( XD) nothing. It's kind of a "because i say so. So deal with it, bi-" hehe

They both die. Aww. ^^ So pretty. Is there always blood and violence included when it's the both of them? It's almost like a threesome, Leon, Cloud and blood. XD I like it. They should have a go at it in their enemies' blood once, just for fun. With theirs included of course, they HAVE to bleed too ^^...whatever.

Anyway, nice one. Really liked it. Their meeting at the end summed it all perfectly. Good job, as usual ^^.

See ya!