A wonderful piece of literature! Beautiful!

Oh god, oh god, that was so beautiful and beautifully written as well. I...This really made me think and read slowly (slower than usual which is very slow) to savour the words and the feelings.
Gods, I'm really bad at interpreting things and so I didn't, but this fic leaves so many images in my mind and it made me think about life and dead and what it's like.
At first it made me kind of happy to read she had found a sense of individuality and in a way had started living until I realized she was already dead and we all die.
That she chose to stay by those who are like her and the seeming indifference (I don't know if that is the right word) she showed at the end about bringing some change into her life, or was she just afraid? *__*

Sorry for babbling (and being incoherent), I'm quite sleepy at the moment and maybe I'm over praising this. but this is a story definitely worth rereading. Great work and keep it up.

"She has runt he fine bones of her own hands over her the plant like fibers..." It's just a misplaced space and if I were you I'd be too lazy to correct it but I thought I'd let you know?^^

" She could not distinguish him from reality, so many times he thought on him." And...I don't really understand the sentence in its context. Maybe that's just because of my bad English.

"She finds those rare birds make her happy in away that eating does not, so she makes an effort to be especially quiet in case one drops by." A missing space I think? But that's not the reason why I'm quoting this sentence, I just find it so touching and cute and sad.
There were a lot of other lines I like and would quote aside from this one but. uhm. Too lazy to pick them out.

But I'll say it again, even if I'm annoying you with this already, but. wonderful work.

Well done! Very nicely written.

This is lovely! And sad. I love the way you describe the viewpoint character's gradual return to consciousness, the little things she notices. It's very vivid. The little parenthetical asides are great too. Beautiful all around, I hope you keep writing more of these!

Another beautifully arranged series of words by tsubaki-hana. I adore this, the feeling it exudes, and every little nuance. Gorgeous.