Did ffnet send my review? I don't see it! Well in case it didn't I want to express my sadness that this is the last chapter:) I hope you update soon!

Oh wonderful chapter! My favorite so far!:) That bath scene was very erotic;) It was also the longest conversation between Bishop and Livetta. I loved it, they're great match!

Oh that was so funny! I could just imagine Quara suddenly opening the door to get a word in Bishop's and Duncan's conversation!:) Actually forgot to mention it earlier, but I love that the fic is written from Bishop's POV.

I really liked the first chapter. Your style is smooth and very enjoyable, it was refreshing after all those awful fics I had the (un)luck meeting today.

I've always thought Duncan had a bit of the unrequited with Esmerelle...nice to see I'm not alone ;)

I can't wait to see what Bishop does with this new bit of information!

This is a very fun read - and I must admit that I find your KC much more interesting than most others I've read about. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I am absolutely enjoying this story. I was snickering out loud as I read, and I can't wait for more. :)

Very nice, I liked the descriptions the best in this story, and the length of your paragraphs varied more. (murphy's law said it was the last I read) Since three of these seem to be starting to string together as a narrative, you may want to consider making them one story, so people will be able to read them in the proper order...

Excellent pacing, totally fun. I hope there's more. :D