Oh, don't say that your work is terrible!! That last peice at the end was pure poetry. Just beautiful! And will ya quit saying that they're outta character? They're IN character if ya ask me! :}

aw~ i love it!~ good job!~♥

i really liked the

"you are my light
I am your darkness
we need each other to survive" - part

kya!!~~ thanks for making such a cute fic :D it made my heart "doki doki~~♥♥"

aww~ soo cuute! its ok akira was adorable~ yayy kissu! lol
good job~ i liked it!! kk lol
kep up the gud work! kk ^^

I thought it was abeautiful one sot, you write very well! I envy you! Keep righting kaay? And thanks for posting it. It's ot bad at all, its really good!
ps. You live in the UK?! I'm so jealous!>O< I live in such a hot country and I want to go to the UK!

What are you speaking about??
o.ò
Your fanfiction is great and one of the best chapter
that i have readed
So then.
Please continue *^-^*

I'm waiting your next chapter

So then i want

see ya soon.

PS: I'm not
an english reader

i'm chilean, but anyway, i want more ^o^-
So please continue...

I want to read everithing that you write

see ya!

I actually love this fic! i would try to convince you to make this into something other than a one shot but i guess that would be asking too much. I love the ending, how Akira is still in the dream for a bit and Shiraogane is trying to calm him down. its rather sweet to read and picture. I also think that the kiss was beautiful. I tried to think of a different word but that happens to fit it the best. I like how you have Akira portrayed in this, even if it is a slight bit off from what im used to reading or watching. Shirogane is perfect in this tho. I also love the title that you chose. It seemed strange at first but after reading the entire ficlet it seemes to fit. Its an interesting story and it gave me ideas that I really shouldnt be having but I cant help it I guess. Please let me know if you plan on making this into something more than just the wonderful one-shot that it is.

wahaha... are u talking about me?
thanks for considering my request...
ure so great...
ure a great author...
ope u can make more fic of M.Factor...
ure cool...
mmwuah...

I think it was good. Some awkward phrasing here and there, but other then that I truly enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!

I loved it! Write another one!

very cute oneshot it was cool to read

Hah! First to review! Im so amazing. I really loved this. I love fanfictions like this. Hurt/comfort is my favorie, even if this is classified as drama/supernatural. Im pretty suprised at how you did this. Akira only seemed slightly out of character. Its pretty good. I throughly enjoy this. I think its something. Its really worth reading. Im glad you wrote this. It makes me smile. I adore it.