You've been reading WAY too much of Faulkner's works.
I understand you're trying to "class up" the concept
of a fan-produced story...but readers shouldn't have
to keep a ** dictionary by their side at all
times.

Great story, awesome.

While I haven't started reading the story yet, I just wanted to say: holy crap this is long! How does this not have more reviews!?

Now I will start reading.

Just started this fanfic. Looks promising so far. Usually, I hate first person perspective in fanfics but I decided to give this one a go just because it was so long. Few fanfics reach over a million words, the one's that looked promising from the start are some of my most cherished fanfics. I'm talking about those incredible life altering type. Let's see how I will feel about this one.

Man, I feel sorry for anything that gets in Keiichi's way! I can't wait to see how he effects the past. I'm also eager to see the whole wedding occur, but can the various kids get to watch it in SD form so they can see what their efforts caused?

A very enjoyable story. I read it long ago, lost track of it, and found it again, enjoyed it even more the second time. It took me two weeks of reading during my spare time to finish and I enjoyed every second. I'm eager to see the next update and learn the Triplets' story. I do hope we get to see the actual wedding. But in this chapter you say the wedding happened in November, does this mean the date was never changed to Valentine's day in the 'real' reality?

I tried. I really tried to read this fic considering that is one of the fics recommended around the web as one of the best. But I just couldn't for it suffers one of the mayor illness of the fanfictions community. The so called "Mary Sue" syndrome in which the story is more about your own character that the characters of the fandom it self. This is not its only problem for all means, but this is the mayor one that I find with this type of fics and in this one in particular. Instead of trying to use the fame of another authors creation so you can write about your character, why don't you try to write a story with original ones? You could still use the Oh my goddess universe if it is necessary but at least create your own characters (goddess) if the story is going to be about your self-inserts and the others just as a backup.

Pure genius. I discovered this by way of longest novel in the world on Wikipedia and found that this fanfiction would place in the Top 10. Such depth and description with a sort of sense once cannot merely pull out of a hat, but out of an extraordinary mind. A pity that you've spent so much time on this when it is only a fanfiction. I read your profile and it seems you have a different view of the world, one that is necessary for such a unique and intricate novel. I cannot read this entire piece, but I can tell you that you are an extremely gifted author. In fact, everything about you is rather disturbing...in a good way though. Vivacious vocabulary as well, Cven. A 10 of 10.

"A delightful memory vied him;"
It might even be correct, but makes little sense to me.
How about, "A delightful memory vied for his attention;"

wrap it up already, chief

This is another great chapter. Now that we have a little back log of chapters, I'm goning to load them and read them on my Palm. Keep writing. And respond sometimes. Why is it when ever you, Cevn update this story, it never shows up on the current page of recent updated stories in the Ah My Goddess Section. I can find it when I use the search feature but it just dosent show up. May be should check on that. I'm gonna enter a short blurb and give everyone a link to it so Everyone on this section will now this story is still being updated. Is Isibilis really possing the body of Mara's future son Falcyn?

You've caused me more frustration than any author I've ever read!I constantly sit here with a dictionary just so I can keep up, I even have to take notes sometimes! Can you possibly understand how aggravating that is? You sir, have smashed my brain against the solid wall of my own ignorance time and time again, and for that, I thank you. Most deeply and humbly, I thank you. Not only have you afforded this story and it's characters the deepness and complexity that they deserve, but by hooking me throughly into thier world, you've forced me to grow as a person to more throughly grasp what it is that they are trying to show me.

Without a doubt you have tapped the essence of your own divinity, and performed a miracle for us all.

Sorry but I just have to say this: i know a story that neer ends! Despite that, it is really interesting so far, even though it's slightly confusing (my greatest experience with Oh My Goddess was something 5 pages of some manga-turned-novel thing). I actually got here by the weird wikipedia way. (You know you click on one thing that leads the next and the next...)

Wow.

I'm speechless. Bravo on returning Cevn. This was a journey of mind-boggling epic proportions, and I'm glad to have read the whole thing.

It got a little confusing in these last couple of chapters, but maybe I just need to re-read it :p

I'm in the middle of reading this...and if I can sum up what I've seen so far it's EPIC.

If I'm not mistaken this Takes the cake for if nothing else the LONGEST piece of literature on the site. And so far extremely well written to boot. I'm working on getting through it bit by bit.

I'll be here a while

Again...wow